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Phreakzoid[PsI]
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0 posted 2000-06-04 10:23 PM



Being what we want to be  
Seeming to be what what cannot be  
Being what everybody thinks I am  
Thinking what no one ever dreamed  

Traveling through virgin lands  
Hell for the " Athens "  
Hospice for the ignorants  
Swallowing dozens  

Having faces that break normality  
Reflecting in others what I hide  
Being myself understands reality  
And like deja vus I let them slide  
  
Writing what I feel  
Being different    
And with each moment    
I am present


 "Be you, and be all you need"
Phreakzoid[PsI]

© Copyright 2000 Rajiv - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-04 10:26 PM


Welcome, Phreakazoid! Good work on this, and I love your signature quote.

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?



Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-06-04 11:23 PM


Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special message. I look forward to reading more from you.  
SEA
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3 posted 2000-06-04 11:25 PM


Phreaskzoid~ Welcome!   Very cool poem!   -SEA
REBECCA ALLYN
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4 posted 2000-06-05 12:12 PM


WOW!!! that is a great poem!! Can't wait to hear more!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky

Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-06-05 08:55 AM


Hi Phreakzoid,

Wonderful work here looking forward to more and welcome to passions.

Cerenity

netswan
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6 posted 2000-06-06 02:45 AM


Welcome to Passions, Phreakzoid!
Wonderful poem here ---- Great read,
thanks

~netswan

Phreakzoid[PsI]
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7 posted 2000-06-09 12:07 PM


Thanks Elizabeth, Poet deVine, Sea, Rebecca, Cerenity & Netswan!!
Glad you guys liked my poems!

 "Be you, and be all you need"
Phreakzoid[PsI]

amazon_lover
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8 posted 2000-06-09 12:12 PM


be what you want to be....its all one needs for life's fulfilment..

Sincerely
A_L

sea_of_okc
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9 posted 2000-06-09 12:26 PM


Welcome Phreak! Good poem, great message  
Thanks for sharing

JP
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Loomis, CA
10 posted 2000-06-09 02:35 PM


Kudos... looking forward to more.

 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP


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11 posted 2000-06-09 03:47 PM


welcome to passions. i enjoyed this poem.
very cool! i look forward to reading
more of your work. take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Phreakzoid[PsI]
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12 posted 2000-06-10 12:37 PM


Thanks Guys!
hope you like my next poems!

 "Be you, and be all you need"
Phreakzoid[PsI]

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