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Silent Wishing

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mariee66
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~~Silent Wishing~~


Alone,
Silent...
In the dark my mind wanders
To thoughts of you.

Thoughts of how we embraced,
While you kissed my welcoming neck
Sending shivers of delight
Trembling through my delicate body.

Oh again how I wish to feel those kisses,
To have you hold me and never let go.

So in the dark I am...
Silent,
Alone...
Wishing you here.

© Copyright 2000 Marie E. - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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1 posted 06-04-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Marie,...such a longing here.

So in the dark I am...
Silent,
Alone...
Wishing you here.

*Oh how I know of this feeling. Take care...great post...thank you for sharing. *Peace.
Aimster
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2 posted 06-04-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Marie
this was simply beautiful!
god do i know how you feel!
excellent writing, intense emotion.
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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3 posted 06-04-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~
A lovely, longing poem.
I like !  
~*Marge*~


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Janet Marie
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4 posted 06-04-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*sigh*
oh how well I know...
hey marie...nice to see you posting again
lovley poem of desire and longing...
yes...looooove those neck kisses  
but then i never met a kiss I didnt like LOL
later-gator
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Mike
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5 posted 06-05-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely written... enjoyed muchly.
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


6 posted 06-05-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Yes there is much longing in this piece. I hope the light shines  for you soon.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


tracie66
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7 posted 06-05-2000 07:33 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Silent,
Alone....
wishing you here
The expression and feeling in this is beautiful  
Love this poem of yours 66

Love the other 66


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


mariee66
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8 posted 06-05-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Thanks all!!  I do APPRECIATE it!!
Marie~
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