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Sven
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0 posted 06-04-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Star of my heart, life and light
Hear my gentle prayer this night
Cast your glow on my love's heart
And let her know, we'll never part

Since into my life she came
She's chased the clouds and rain
She's made my days worth living
And touched me with her giving

Tender angel from above
Thank you today for her love
I am offering thanks that she
Has given her love to me

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 06-04-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

how tender and romantic!

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com

brian madden
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2 posted 06-04-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Sven I must say most of your poems over the last few days have been quite romantic, so has the love bug bitten? I must apologise but I am just been a lonely and bitter single person LOL.

a beautiful poem/prayer. heavenly.  


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Poet deVine
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3 posted 06-04-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I guess there has to be one relentless romantic in the bunch! Your poetry flows sir... excellent poem!  
SpitFire
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4 posted 06-04-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Aahhh Sven,...once again.  You have written some beautiful poetry.  This is a lovely, lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 06-04-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sven you romantic you! very beautiful indeed.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


vandana
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6 posted 06-04-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Yet another good poem from,Sevn.Keep it up.Enjoyed it!!!!!!
Isis
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7 posted 06-04-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

As usual another sighing poem.  Your loving heart is so sweet Sven!!  Wonderful  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Alle'cram
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8 posted 06-04-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Amen to your prayer and beautiful poem/prayer it was. Your poems make me smile. Thanks, marcy
MagnoliaBlue
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9 posted 06-04-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Oh Sven...

This touched something in me. I really like

it.

Thanks for sharing this.

MBlue  
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10 posted 06-04-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
You've got the most romantic nature
and it shows in everything you write.
A gentle heart is what I see.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lorraine Nisbet
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11 posted 06-04-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Sven~

Lovely, absolutely lovely.

~Lorraine~

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Marina
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12 posted 06-04-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

i have to agree with Brian here......anything you want to tell us?????  
Your poetry has definitely been very romantic lately??   Well, who am I to ask.....

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-04-2000).]
Sven
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13 posted 06-05-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all again. . .

Irish Rose, thank you. . .

brian, almost all of my poetry is like this. . .I'm just a hopeless Romantic, the "King of Romance" as my fellow Passions poets have dubbed me!!  

deVine, you know it!!  That's me. . . the "Relentless Romantic"!!  LOL    

spitfire, you're welcome, glad that you liked it. . .

DA, always my friend. . .

vandana, thank you very much. . .

Isis, thank you, here's a smile for you!  

Alle'cram, thank you, glad that I could make your day in some small way. . .

Magnolia, you're welcome, and thank you. . .

Marge, thank you. . . it is my nature to be romantic, I know no other way. . .

Lorriane, thank you!!

Marina, I could tell you, but then. . . I'd have to kill you!!  LOL  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Cerenity
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14 posted 06-05-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Sven,

Wonderful, Wonderful you write such lovely poems.

Cerenity
 
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