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Slashed soul
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0 posted 06-04-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

Hold me when I cry
touch me when I am cold
be with me forever, young too old.

Smile at my errors
laugh at my jokes
kiss me in the night.

Love me constantly
eternally be my friend
buddies to the end.

Eye to eye we see
be here for me.

-Rich-



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1 posted 06-04-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

this reads very much like a marriage proposal...well done.

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