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He who knows me... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
You think that you know me? I laugh. For you have never tried to see. You ask inane questions and ponder, but I remain a mystery. You quickly become dependant and wish for me to do the same. I refuse to lose part of myself. I have no desire for your name. You stifle me and I feel trapped. You build walls that I must break through. I crave to be free...individual...one. I do not wish to be an extension of you. He who really knows me and still wishes to be mine. He is the one who will hold me until the end of time. "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! I think I could have written this! I agree, I agree, I agree!!! Very good poem!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
HEY! I agree too, wonderful TA wonderful! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Thank you PoetDevine and Thank you Dark Angel. I really struggled with this one. Didn't feel like it was my best effort. Was in desperate need of feed back. Thanks a bunch!!!! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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