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~Nature's Freedom Haiku~

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Honeybee
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*For some reason, lately, all I have been doing is living, breathing and dreaming haikus and senryus, I can't stop writing them!  


~NATURE'S FREEDOM HAIKU~

5-7-5

Crashing ocean waves
and soaring eagle above
both wondrous and free

*By Melissa Honeybee*
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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Melissa~
And doing a right-fine job of it !
~*Marge*~


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to the top with this haiku. wonderful as always keep them coming.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

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What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
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Don't stop Melissa, go with the flow. This is great!  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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4 posted 06-05-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Melissa, we don't mind!!!  Please continue!!

This was wonderful. . . can picture it in my mind right now!!!

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Hi Melissa,

I really love this one, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity
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Well, you certainly write them beautifully, Melissa!

Elizabeth


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Very nice,
this is a sweet little Haiku,
truly lovely,
so simple,
not typical,
I thank you .

L.of.L. Tom .


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Thank you all for the kind replies and for the support  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
 
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