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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-04 09:35 AM


*For some reason, lately, all I have been doing is living, breathing and dreaming haikus and senryus, I can't stop writing them!  


~NATURE'S FREEDOM HAIKU~

5-7-5

Crashing ocean waves
and soaring eagle above
both wondrous and free

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-06-04 10:57 AM


Melissa~
And doing a right-fine job of it !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
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2 posted 2000-06-04 01:51 PM


to the top with this haiku. wonderful as always keep them coming.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

EagleOne
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3 posted 2000-06-04 11:14 PM


Don't stop Melissa, go with the flow. This is great!  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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4 posted 2000-06-05 12:40 PM


Melissa, we don't mind!!!  Please continue!!

This was wonderful. . . can picture it in my mind right now!!!

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-06-05 09:07 AM


Hi Melissa,

I really love this one, thank you for sharing.

Cerenity

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6 posted 2000-06-05 10:36 AM


Well, you certainly write them beautifully, Melissa!

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?



angelswing
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7 posted 2000-06-05 10:58 AM


Very nice,
this is a sweet little Haiku,
truly lovely,
so simple,
not typical,
I thank you .

L.of.L. Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

Honeybee
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8 posted 2000-06-05 02:46 PM




Thank you all for the kind replies and for the support  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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