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Please Do Not Wake Him

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hoot_owl_rn
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25 posted 06-05-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Liz...I am absolutely melting with this one and so glad I stopped in to say hi today....absolutely beautiful my friend  
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26 posted 06-05-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Remarkable, truly, beautifully, remarkable...

and now, my quill, to rest...

for I am not, nor am I able

to compete with this, the best...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

Elizabeth Santos
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27 posted 06-05-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Suthern and Longjohn,
You truly honor me with your readings
Thank you both

Hoot, so happt to see you. I edited this on since you read it, improved some of the lines
Thank you, enjoy yourself and don't forget us. Denise was ove to my house yesterday. If you come to this area, please stop and see me

Elizabeth Santos
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28 posted 06-05-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

sunshine, your comment was so beautiful, but please don,t ever putdown your pen
thank you dear
liz
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29 posted 06-05-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

OOOOO's and Ahhhhh's were heard and then a hush fell over the breathless audience...and then the deafening ROAR of the crowd..... I Loved every word...they floated like angel wings across the sky.  You are a Queen of Weave!! Thank you so much for sharing this.
Elizabeth Santos
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30 posted 06-05-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Come hither, little butterfly
And light on petal's wing
With sails of gold now open full
to life's most precious things
Rise swiftly up in flutterings
With powdery wing in pose
But tumble and twist in silence please
My darling's eyes are closed

Thaank you so much, butterfly
Love
Liz
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31 posted 11-29-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Just beautiful...I had to read it again...you have my deepest sympathy.

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32 posted 02-13-2001 08:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

As I do not believe this is in my library it will be added as of today.
 
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