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Satisfaction (sunshine challenge/word by spiked) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Satisfaction/Satiated (all my life) I have waited. (at-one-ment) hunger, yet abated. Chains. Restrained, freedom burning... Compensation, (soul-starvation) contentment just a charcoal churning... A Duel---my head, my heart, depart... Observance--- Saw, I heard, the spark-- Payment now for pleasure spent (if Love is sin, no recompense....) There can be no restitution, blossom falls in spent fruition-- spoiled seed of absolution. Oh Satiate, sufficiently, colored by reality--- Now whisper to me, sweetly, please: Tell me, "What is yours?" [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow, Serenity that poem was pure satisfaction. A Duel---my head, my heart, depart... Observance--- Saw, I heard, the spark-- Payment now for pleasure spent (if Love is sin, no recompense....) There can be no restitution, blossom falls in spent fruition-- spoiled seed of absolution. Oh Satiate, sufficiently, colored by reality--- Now whisper to me, sweetly, please: Tell me, "What is yours?" wow, loved this one. excellent answer to the challenge. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Satisfaction/Satiated (all my life) I have waited. (at-one-ment) hunger, yet abated. Chains. Restrained, freedom burning... Compensation, (soul-starvation) contentment -------------- A Duel---my head, my heart, depart... Observance--- Saw, I heard, the spark-- Payment now for pleasure spent (if Love is sin, no recompense....) There can be no restitution, ------------ Now whisper to me, sweetly, please: Tell me, "What is yours?" ----------- when I know...I will blow whisper your way... love this poem me twin...once again mirrors...perfect word choice for you to be inspired by... got me ping and I LOVE it...I will pong you soon... later me twin-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my, I'm so glad this is not a contest, for you would indeed be one of the top contestants...well done, well done! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You have done the challenge with more than satisfaction but with groundbreaking effort. You have done me proud and I am very pleased. Thankz Serene Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all--this was much fun. I appreciate the generous comments very much... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"I can't get no. . ." oh sorry. . . This was great serenity. . . love the last two lines. . . so full of so many things!!! Just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, Wonderful work here dear, enjoyed muches. Cerenity |
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