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Satisfaction (sunshine challenge/word by spiked)

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 06-04-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Satisfaction/Satiated
(all my life)
I have waited.
(at-one-ment)
hunger, yet abated.
Chains. Restrained,
freedom burning...
Compensation,
(soul-starvation)
contentment
just a charcoal churning...

A Duel---my head,
my heart, depart...
Observance---
Saw, I heard,
the spark--
Payment now
for pleasure spent
(if Love is sin, no
recompense....)
There can be no restitution,
blossom falls in spent fruition--
spoiled seed of absolution.

Oh Satiate,
sufficiently,
colored by
reality---

Now whisper to me, sweetly, please:
Tell me, "What is yours?"




[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 06-04-2000).]
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brian madden
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1 posted 06-04-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

wow, Serenity that poem was pure satisfaction.

A Duel---my head,
my heart, depart...
Observance---
Saw, I heard,
the spark--
Payment now
for pleasure spent
(if Love is sin, no
recompense....)
There can be no restitution,
blossom falls in spent fruition--
spoiled seed of absolution.

Oh Satiate,
sufficiently,
colored by
reality---

Now whisper to me, sweetly, please:
Tell me, "What is yours?"

wow, loved this one. excellent answer to the challenge.



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2 posted 06-04-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Satisfaction/Satiated
(all my life)
I have waited.
(at-one-ment)
hunger, yet abated.
Chains. Restrained,
freedom burning...
Compensation,
(soul-starvation)
contentment
--------------
A Duel---my head,
my heart, depart...
Observance---
Saw, I heard,
the spark--
Payment now
for pleasure spent
(if Love is sin, no
recompense....)
There can be no restitution,
------------
Now whisper to me, sweetly, please:
Tell me, "What is yours?"
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when I know...I will blow whisper your way...
love this poem me twin...once again
mirrors...perfect word choice for you to be inspired by...
got me ping and I LOVE it...I will pong you soon...
later me twin-gator
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Sunshine
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3 posted 06-04-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Oh my, I'm so glad this is not a contest, for you would indeed be one of the top contestants...well done, well done!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

spiked
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4 posted 06-04-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

You have done the challenge with more than satisfaction but with groundbreaking effort.
You have done me proud and I am very pleased.
Thankz Serene
Rich
serenity blaze
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5 posted 06-04-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thanks to all--this was much fun.  I appreciate the generous comments very much...
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6 posted 06-05-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

"I can't get no. . ." oh sorry. . .

This was great serenity. . . love the last two lines. . . so full of so many things!!!

Just wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Cerenity
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7 posted 06-05-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Serenity,

Wonderful work here dear, enjoyed muches.

Cerenity
 
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