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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-06-04 02:23 AM


Looking at your smile
I knew I was in love
I can see myself sharing that smile
each and everyday for the rest of my life
What I felt from that moment on
the smile that I saw over and over
the picture of your face in my mind
my words are bind by that smile
I hope you come to realize what I feel for you
sharing my love with that perfect smile
melting heart is what I felt
upon receiving your smile
your smile struck me like a cupid's arrow
I couldn't turn from that smile
as my focus grew deeper
I came to realize that what I saw were
pearls of heaven aligning your rose lips
Seeing you smile laid my soul at ease
stranger is what I seen not now
for your smile has said what words cannot express
your lips have spoken without moving at all
your silence smile has me under a spell
my attention is what u shall receive
in return I ask of you this my dear
that u shall not fade that smile
which has been shining brightly.



 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 2000-06-04 09:14 AM


Nicley written.  Yep, a smile can be pretty nice to look at sometimes.
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2 posted 2000-06-04 09:36 AM


loveley poem   It's great the way we can all focus in on the little things about someone that all add up to make us love them.
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3 posted 2000-06-04 02:48 PM


I thank you for your kind words.


 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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4 posted 2000-06-04 06:01 PM


A smile can break down a lot of barriers! It disarms your enemy and lets someone know you are a nice person!  
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5 posted 2000-06-04 06:06 PM


~your lips have spoken without moving at all.
*I love this.  A smile is a language that ALL understand.  Great poem you have here.  .

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6 posted 2000-06-04 06:14 PM


I know sometimes we only have a photograph and that memory or smile on that photo says it all, sometimes it is a smile from a complete stranger...great poem, full of emotion, I can tell you are captivated by this person.
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7 posted 2000-06-05 01:43 AM


I want to tell this person what I feel so I plan to give them this poem which infact was inspired by them. I thank you again for your kind comments. It is people like you who give me the  power, inspiration and motivation to keep on writing.

 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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