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Xeonox
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0 posted 06-04-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Xeonox

Looking at your smile
I knew I was in love
I can see myself sharing that smile
each and everyday for the rest of my life
What I felt from that moment on
the smile that I saw over and over
the picture of your face in my mind
my words are bind by that smile
I hope you come to realize what I feel for you
sharing my love with that perfect smile
melting heart is what I felt
upon receiving your smile
your smile struck me like a cupid's arrow
I couldn't turn from that smile
as my focus grew deeper
I came to realize that what I saw were
pearls of heaven aligning your rose lips
Seeing you smile laid my soul at ease
stranger is what I seen not now
for your smile has said what words cannot express
your lips have spoken without moving at all
your silence smile has me under a spell
my attention is what u shall receive
in return I ask of you this my dear
that u shall not fade that smile
which has been shining brightly.



 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
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Mike
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1 posted 06-04-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicley written.  Yep, a smile can be pretty nice to look at sometimes.
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2 posted 06-04-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

loveley poem   It's great the way we can all focus in on the little things about someone that all add up to make us love them.
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3 posted 06-04-2000 02:48 PM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

I thank you for your kind words.


 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
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4 posted 06-04-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A smile can break down a lot of barriers! It disarms your enemy and lets someone know you are a nice person!  
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5 posted 06-04-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~your lips have spoken without moving at all.
*I love this.  A smile is a language that ALL understand.  Great poem you have here.  .
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I know sometimes we only have a photograph and that memory or smile on that photo says it all, sometimes it is a smile from a complete stranger...great poem, full of emotion, I can tell you are captivated by this person.
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7 posted 06-05-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

I want to tell this person what I feel so I plan to give them this poem which infact was inspired by them. I thank you again for your kind comments. It is people like you who give me the  power, inspiration and motivation to keep on writing.

 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
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