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~The Angel of Destiny~

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 06-04-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

The moon flies among silvered rains
And weeps with wisdom's grace
Among haunting breaths of melody
One can see forever's face.

Dewy thoughts adorn the sky
And cling to eyes of gold
Upon her lips of crystal dreams
Are truths of life once told.

Angel wings now sprayed with soot
Still shine with dignity
Among the leaves her voice is heard
Lingering upon the breeze.

Shadowy visions draped in light
Dance within her soul
And with a whisper of her heart
Cherished words are known.

"In a moment lies eternity
And in a kiss resides forever
Dawn will emerge within your life
If love is held together."

'Neath the silvered rains she soars
The angel known as destiny
Giving grace to those in need
And allowing us to truly see.





 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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1 posted 06-04-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Yep, this I like!   Beautiful words make a very beautiful poem, great job Alwye
~Heather
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2 posted 06-04-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

*Moment of awestruck wonder and then wild cheering*  LOL, I loved this one!  I don't even know what to say... I absolutely adored lines like, "Upon her lips of crystal dreams," "Dewy thoughts adorn the sky," "Among haunting breaths of melody," and "The moon flies among silvered rains."

And of course some of the greatest lines I've ever read...

"In a moment lies eternity
And in a kiss resides forever
Dawn will emerge within your life
If love is held together."


 Abrahm Simons

"Flew too high and burnt the wing
Lost my faith in everything" - Trent Reznor, "Somewhat Damaged"
Janet Marie
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3 posted 06-04-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

my my my...
you are the princess of pefect rhyme and meter...
and the queen of imagery...
and your vocabulary is astonishing...
*bowing before the queen*
Im not worthy  
this is exquisite K, truly.
you have such a gift.
take care, jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 06-04-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Your words, your imagery, your flow ... all incredibly beautiful in this Krista ... lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Mike
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5 posted 06-04-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Beautifully written.  Enjoyed muchly.
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6 posted 06-04-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
Magical muse of beauteous phrase
lives within your heart this day.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
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7 posted 06-04-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

These words are as lucid and elegant as a midsummers night dream

Angel wings now sprayed with soot
Still shine with dignity
Among the leaves her voice is heard
Lingering upon the breeze.

Shadowy visions draped in light
Dance within her soul
And with a whisper of her heart
Cherished words are known.

wonderful.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

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Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
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8 posted 06-04-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Krista~

That was a beautiful poem.  I loved your lines... 'specially "The moon flies among silvered rains.."  That was wonderful!  YOu must post more very soon.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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9 posted 06-04-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Perfection in poetry... I like it very much!  
Alwye
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In the space between moments


10 posted 06-04-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

X Angel- Thank you so much!

Dusk- *blushes*  You're just too sweet dearie.  Thank you for the wonderful reply.  

JM- It is I that is not worthy of your presense, Miss.  Thank you so much for the reply, you've brought a smile to my face.  

Kit- Thank you so much!

Mike- Thank you.

Marge- Your replies are just as lovely as your poetry and it is a great honor to have you enjoy my poem.

Brian- thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

Dawn- Thank ya, girlie. I knew you'd like the line with the moon in it...I was thinkin bout you when I wrote it.  

Ms. deVine- I'm glad you enjoyed.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


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11 posted 06-05-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

"Upon her lips of crystal dreams..."  WOW!   Girl, you sure know how to paint a shimmering image of magic in the reader's mind!  Exquisitely lovely!  This is so beautiful, it *tinkles* when you read it, like windchimes!  WOW again!

 "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme

Alwye
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Femme, I am honored by your reply!  *blushes* It tinkles, eh?  I think you're right...it does kinda tinkle...thank you so much for your kind words, I deeply appreciate it.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~




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13 posted 06-05-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Aw, Krista, you're flowing again! Smoother that the baby's bottom your lines are and such a pleasure to read. Very nicely done....
 
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