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You Forgot To Tell My Heart

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Marge Tindal
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You Forgot To Tell My Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

You told me you were leaving
You said we had to part
I know you told my mind
but you forgot to tell my heart

Suddenly you were gone
with just a wave of your hand
Even though you told my mind
my heart didn't understand

You faded from the picture
like you'd never been part
of all the things I dreamed of
with you right from the start

And if upon a daydream
you should come my way
Please don't tell my heart
if you don't intend to stay

If you should return tomorrow
asking for a new start
I'd probably be delighted
for you forgot to tell my heart






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 06-04-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Mom--hate to see you sad...(just lemme at 'im...)   prayers, songs, and, of course, hugs...Love to you.
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2 posted 06-04-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity, my child~
It's a P-O-E-M ....  
But thank you for caring.
Hope you enjoyed it.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-04-2000).]
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3 posted 06-04-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

"You faded from the picture
like you'd never been part
of all the things I dreamed of
with you right from the start"

This one brought back some memories Marge, well done as always.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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4 posted 06-04-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

this poem felt so familiar, did you ever post it here before or am I having deja vu? I thought it was a lovely poem Marge wonderful job  
~H
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So beautiful Marge...I can relate to this well...the heart can be so stubborn.  Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


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6 posted 06-04-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Marge, my dear, I can certainly relate to this....brought back a flood of memories

But, beautifully written as always  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

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EagleOne~
Happy to stir memories for a friend.
Thank you for the reply.

XAngel~
So far, I've not reposted any of my poetry.
I just wrote this one tonight ... thought of a friend who might need it and poof ! there it was !
Deja`Vu!  

Alwye~
Glad you enjoyed it, hon.

Jeffrey~
Glad to know the memories are there to flow.
I like that.
Thank you, dear friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             





[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-04-2000).]
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8 posted 06-04-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Marge, when I, or anyone can relate and care, it's a G-R-E-A-T  P-o-e-m....
and the mark of an artist...

For that I will thank you twice.
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Serenity, my sweet, sweet child~
For that I will give you TWO hugs !
Love ya'
~*Mom*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Floating gently on a cloud....


10 posted 06-04-2000 04:53 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a wonderful poem...how often does the heart refuse to believe something. You express that so beautifully in this poem...it really moved me. Thanks for sharing, my mentor!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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yes i'm in that boat
and i need to stop riding it
i am at sea for eternity
if i don't get out
but how to let go


monique
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12 posted 06-04-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"I know you told my mind
but you forgot to tell my heart"

Beautifully written Marge!  I especially loved the line above, it's melodic ... music should be placed to your words, what a wonderful song this would make!

Best wishes,
/Kit


[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-04-2000).]
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Lil' Lizzie~
You are always welcome, my little friend.
Thank you for being YOU !

Monique~
Thank you for the reply.
Pull up anchor and head for port !

Kit~
Thanks, hon.  Sooooo, you've heard me
singing, huh?  It's surprising how many
of my poems catch me through a song I just
suddenly break into.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 06-04-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Marge, yet another beautiful poem.  It's true although love may leave, it's difficult for the heart to let go, I know this feeling all too well.  The first two stanzas are my favourite  

Love ya o' queen of poetry,
Melissa Honeybee
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Marge~

Beautiful poem, my friend.  Doesn't it always seem the heart is the last to know when love ends?  I just love that phrase....
"you forgot to tell me heart".  It is superb!
This one hits close to home for me....oh the memories that come crashing back.  Thanks for sharing.

Lone Wolf


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Marge,  I just love this poem.  Sometimes the heart just won't listen to the mind.  
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Melissa~
I love your replies.  You're such a sweetie.
Thank you.

LoneWolf~
Embrace those memories - they are special.
Thanks always for your replies.

Eloise~
Thank you, lady.
Glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 06-04-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Absolute perfection!  I loved it.

"And if upon a daydream
You should come my way
Please don't tell my heart
If you don't intend to stay"

It touched my heart.  Great job.
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I liked it very much.
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TennesseeAngel~
I'm glad to know it touched you.  Thank you.

VanDana~
I knew in my heart that you would
find it and like it.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Very lovely, Marge!  

Denise
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There were times when my heart was left in the dark...I know this feeling.
Nicely expressed Marge!
Marie~
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this reminds me that our hearts simply have a mind of their own! wonderful.

 Kathleen
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Denise~
Thanks, friend.  I KNOW you had a nice
visit with Lizzie.  

Mariee~
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend.

Kathleen~
Amen !  You got that right !
~*Marge*~


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