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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


0 posted 06-03-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EagleOne

You are

The breeze on my face
Envelop me

The sun on my skin
Warm me

The rain in my hair
Cool me

The light in my darkness
Show me

The joy in my life
Smile for me

The air I breathe
Sustain me

The reason for being
Inspire me

You are my life
Love me



 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


1 posted 06-03-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

EagleOne~
Just a simple roadmap to follow ...
it's lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 3768
Michigan


2 posted 06-04-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


OOOOOOOOOOO I love this one
Simple requests from the
heart, but they mean so
much and are the hardest
to find sometimes.  You
missed nothing on this,
writing from your heart
how could you?!  Your
poetry has reached a new
level and I do so love
the view!! Soaring High
Eagle one  
**Angel Wing Hugs**
EagleOne
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Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


3 posted 06-04-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Marge.....I think it is the simple things in life that are often the best.   I Thank you.

Butterfly.....Yes! they mean much and can be hard to find, but definately worth the effort. You are far to free with your priase my friend. I thank you for your comments, and the AWH, both are warmly recievd.  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Janet Marie
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4 posted 06-04-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

The air I breathe
Sustain me

The reason for being
Inspire me
------------
*SIGH*
cant ask for much more devotion than that can we...
lovely poem Eagle...
wonderful expressions of contentment found in another.
thank you much for your wonderful replies to my work of late...
later-kindpoet-gator,
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


5 posted 06-04-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Janet.... I thank you so much for your kind words.

As for for my replies, well, your work inspires the reply's   ....and you are most welcome!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


SpitFire
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Posts 2428


6 posted 06-04-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Eagle One,...Oh, I absolutely love this.  Really, I think it's wonderful.  Thank you for such a great read...it's a sure treasure. Take care. *Peace.
peppermint35
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Posts 1119
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7 posted 06-04-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for peppermint35   Email peppermint35   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peppermint35

Sometimes the simplest messages are actually the most complex...and meaningful.  This spoke to my heart.  Thank you so much for sharing it.

 Peppermint
Life is a Wheel
Irie
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Posts 1526
Washington State


8 posted 06-04-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Refreshing and sweet!
I love this one Eagle!  
Well done friend.


 ~Sheri
vandana
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9 posted 06-04-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I loved this poem very much.
brian madden
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ireland


10 posted 06-04-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a lovely poem. this love, ow yes. There seems to a romantic feeling in the air at passions lately. Must be the Summer air.
wonderful thoughts, enjoyed the poem.

 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.




[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-04-2000).]
mariee66
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since 01-30-2000
Posts 621
Recess, OfYourMind


11 posted 06-04-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

So few words, yet "wow!" what a powerful punch!  This is wonderful...full of that GREAT emotion we call LOVE!
Marie~
EagleOne
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Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


12 posted 06-04-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

SpitFire....Once again I thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed. It seems I spend a lot of time saying thankyou to you.  

peppermint35....this piece has that kind of feel, doesn't it? Thankyou for reading.

Irie.....Thankyou for taking the time to read and comment. I'm so glad you liked it.  

vandana......Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.

Brian....."somthing in the air"...mmm..I was thinking the same thing just now. Thanks!  

Marie.....Thankyou so much for your comments.  

Janet.....if you happen to pop back in this is the one I would choose for your challenge.



 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown




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REBECCA ALLYN
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since 05-09-2000
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13 posted 06-05-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Beautiful words, you truly are a poet!!!
Love your work as always

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


14 posted 06-05-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Rebecca.....There are some who would argue that statement, mostly me.....LOL. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, take care!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 01-29-2000
Posts 5694
Sydney, Australia


15 posted 06-05-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Eddie - you have been most busy in my absence from passions I see!  This is a lovely piece of work - well done as always my friend xx

Ciao Bello
Roniece
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


16 posted 06-05-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

As always Roniece I thankyou for your valued comments. Your absence has been noticed, I have missed you my friend. You know me Roniece I try to stay busy and keep out of trouble..lol, what better way than to write! We will catch up soon.  

Ciao Bella
Eddie

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


17 posted 06-05-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

EagleOne~
This is so tender and warm, very meanigful.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


18 posted 06-05-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

EagleOne~

something about this really struck
a note with me. so simple yet so
beautiful at the same time. you paint
some lovely expressions here and make
the reader smile! thanks so much.

take care,
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


19 posted 06-06-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Tracie.....Thankyou!, I'm glad you found something in it.

Amy......I thank you for your wonderful comments. The gift of a smile is the greatest gift.  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Rosebud1229
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since 04-05-2000
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20 posted 06-07-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very passionate, beautiful similies of love

 
CocoBaci
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since 05-06-2000
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21 posted 06-08-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Back to the top for another read
Very nice poetry
Coco  
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


22 posted 06-09-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Oh, thy love is so sweet,
A poetry treat,
That other brave knights compete,
This fair maiden is touched,
To read such poetry makes one blush...

THIS SHOULD BE THE ONE FOR THE CHALLENGE TO SVEN!
EagleOne
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Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


23 posted 06-09-2000 05:17 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Rosebud.....Thankyou for your time in reading and replying.

Coco....I'm glad you like it!

Romantic Heart....Thankyou so much for reading, and your reply. I'm not sure it would be ethical to post this for Sven's challenge as was writen prior to the challenge.  

I thank one and all for reading and responding. I am overwhelmed by the replies,. Thankyou!



 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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