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She & Her

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PoetasterD
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0 posted 06-03-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for PoetasterD   Email PoetasterD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetasterD

I lie in bed waiting,
my heart pounds in breathless anticipation.
Looking forward to holding her again,
fearing what is to come.

She is lying by my side,
I am oblivious to the fact she is near.
As I hold her in my tight embrace,
I want her more than words can say.

I caress her soft skin gently,
how I love to give her pleasure.
She has no idea that I feel for her,
she thinks she is my only desire.

I kiss her body tenderly
She is unaware, embraced by slumber
I taste her sweetness on my lips,
if she knew she would be bitter

I feel her quiver beneath me.
She lies motionless in the still of the night.
Her heart racing as fast as mine,
gasping to catch her breath

Waves of ecstacy overwhelm her.
Making love to her like she wants it.
This lust I feel for her is insatiable
If she knew she'd be devastated.

Awaking soaked in sweat,
only to find her gone.
She awakes disturbed by my movement,
"What's the matter" she ask.

So I lie in bed again and say, "nothing"
as she is again embraced by slumber
Longing to have her for the first time, again.
Oh how I lust for her in my dreams.

© Copyright 2000 M. Derek Drudge - All Rights Reserved
Tennessee Angel
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1 posted 06-03-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Wow, I love it.  I had to read it twice but something in it just got to me.  Very well written.  
Dark Angel
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2 posted 06-03-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW the last two stanzas really got to me.
Loved this.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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3 posted 06-03-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very clever writing poetTD...
SHE AND HER...could get kinda crowded in that bed...
very cool poem...
very sensual as well.
great writing.
take care, jm


 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling

If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 06-04-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Too true...and it can work boths ways...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

PoetasterD
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Posts 42
Florida


5 posted 06-04-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for PoetasterD   Email PoetasterD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetasterD

Thank you all for your replies. It is such a rewarding feeling (as I am sure you all know) to have someone read and enjoy your creations. I have written poetry for many years for my own enjoyment, and as a way to express feelings and emotions inspired by events in my life. Only a few of my poems have EVER been seen by anyone other than I. I am glad that I discovered this site and I hope to become a regular visitor and contributor, schedule permitting.....

Best wishes to you all,

Poetaster D

ps) I also welcome any suggestions/critiques that anyone has to offer. I like to learn something new every day  
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