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The Splendors Of Night - Kit's Challenge

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Eloise
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This was my first poem.  It was written as a sophomore in high school.  It is also a repost from #5.


We watch with amazement
As evening is near.
The beauty of nature
In our earthly sphere.
The sun as it's setting
Across mountains so fine.
The beautiful sunset with colors divine.
Lets one know, that evening,
Is not far behind.

But the light of the moon
As it climbs to its height.
Changes the evening
To the stillness of night.
Twinkling stars
In the heavens so bright
Invite us to look
At the splendors of night.
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 06-03-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise~
This is simply breathtakingly lovely.

'Twinkling stars
In the heavens so bright
Invite us to look
At the splendors of night.'

Oh, how I love the night.
~*Marge*~




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tracie66
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Eloise~
This is beautiful sweetie, I loved the way it flowed and the beautiful imagery  
lovely poem
TC~


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Denise
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3 posted 06-03-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hey you! Welcome back! Nice to see you again! This poem is very beautiful!  

Denise
Eloise
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4 posted 06-03-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Marge, thanks.  You know me, moon, stars, night, dreams etc.

Appreciate the comments tracie, thanks.  

Denise,  thank you, thank you.  I'm so glad to be back.  New computer and no disconnecting anymore!!  Thanks so much for posting for me also.  
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