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The Passing Of Life As Does The Wind

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Cerenity
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The Passing Of Life As Does The Wind


The wind rushes by seemingly
with places to go, yet no
destination was set just forward
motion.

Seeping in through every crack
and crevasse taking
charge of the stillest stagnate air
moving it about with no
sight of effort.

The wind having much power
can move mountains in
time yet float a feather ever so
softly with grace and ease.

It speaks to those who are listening
and wanting to hear
of its tales of lifeís adventures
and sights of the world.

Love has bloomed in seeds sent
with the wind in the
earnest of passions speed, and
love has blown away
on turbulent waves of scorn tossed
out of the hearts safe realm.

The wind friend or foe can always
be found just around
the corner, just around the hill,
where ever it will for sure
be moving forward as do we until
the very end of itís ride,
the end of itís existence except
in memory.


By,   Cerenity




[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 06-04-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 06-03-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW Cerenity, loved this very much..

and this...

The wind friend or foe can always
be found just around
the corner, just around the hill,
where ever it will for sure
be moving forward as do we until
the very end of itís ride,
the end of itís existence except
in memory.

Well Done.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Cerenity
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2 posted 06-03-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Dark Angel,

So glad to hear from you how have you been? thank you so much for your kind words this just kind of hit me or should I say a BIG gust of wind hit me and this is what came of it, thank you again.

Love,  Cerenity
Alle'cram
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3 posted 06-03-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Cenenity,
  Wow, oh wow! I love this one. You have done a remarkable job.

"The wind rushes by seemingly"
"having much power can move mountains"  
"float a feather ever so softly with grace and ease."

This one spoke to me and thank you.  marcy
Butterflies_dont_cry
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I loved the way this flowed and the images that you painted.  A wonderful job Miss Cerenity!  Thank you for sharing it.
jwesley
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5 posted 06-03-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Wonderful piece Cerenity...great image. Gentle blows...er, flows, all the way through.  Really like the way it just kind of drifed begining to end. Nice.  And I could see BDC certainly understood. And as usual looking forward to your next piece.


jwesley
Denise
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6 posted 06-03-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautifully done, Cerenity!

Denise
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Cerenity~
I really enjoyed this one, hon.
Gentle breezes of friendship blew
you my way ... and I'm thankful for that.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cerenity
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8 posted 06-04-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marcy,
I am glad to meet you, you started the same time I did but I don't remember the name, I am sorry if I missed your work, I will be looking out for it OK. I am so glad you liked this one it came upon the wind in a flash, Thank you.

My dear, Butterfly,
How are you I see you have sent me the wind and a very cute one at that. I am so glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Hi jwesley,
Hello how are you doing, I must look you up as well, yes this flowed so nicely just blow my way, thank you so much for your kind words.

Hi Denise,
Nice to see you, Thank you so much, today just seem to be the day to read and write poetry I was able to spend time and read alot of wonderful work here at passions it was so nice.

Hi Marge,
No my dear you are were my rainbow ends, at (YOUR) the heart of GOLD!!!! Thank you for your sweet and loving words that encourage me greatly.

Love,  Cerenity

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 06-04-2000 08:28 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was simply beautiful Cerenity ... soothing, calming and richly filled with imagery. I loved it!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Cerenity
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10 posted 06-04-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Kit,

Good morning, Thank you so much for your kind reply, this was a fun one to do.

Love,  Cerenity
 
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