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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-03-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Behind the scenes.


Scene One:

Where is your
    strength and
              independence?……

  i've mislead, i've deceived
    i'm artificial and plastic
        how can you live this
                façade?

Scene Two:

couldn't you wait?
    you're a selfish brat.
        impolite, crude
   and insensitive……

sorry my dears
       note "dears"
    i'll try to be
        who you want me
                to be
                   when you
   want me to be
     I'll change for you
            at the flick
                of a switch
                          easy.
          

Dark Angel




 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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I see pain and bitterness in this poem and some strength...go with the strength!  Hugs!
Dark Angel
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Thanks Martie.. planning to  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Denise
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3 posted 06-03-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

That sounds like an awful lot of work trying to please everybody else. I'd rather prefer to just be myself and let the chips fall where they may. Which I'm sure is just what you plan to do! Great poem, Dark Angel!

Denise
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4 posted 06-03-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Deep, Powerful and Painfilled.  Your work always speaks to me Dark Angel and this one speaks loudly!!  Thank you for sharing this, I understand.
Tennessee Angel
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5 posted 06-03-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

I really enjoyed this one, Dark Angel!  You have an awesome talent.  I find myself looking through the posts for your name.  Thank you for sharing your gift.
Dark Angel
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6 posted 06-04-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, thank you.

BDC its nice to know that my poetry speaks to you   thats so lovely... Thanks for your lovely reply.

TA, wow thank you for your kind reply, I find myself looking for your poetry as well  



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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