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Confused(my first poem)

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Angelical Face
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0 posted 06-03-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Angelical Face   Email Angelical Face   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelical Face


Confused


I don't know what's going on...
I don't feel anything...
The love is ending...
Why?
Why did it happen?
Everything is changing...
I don't  know if I want it...
I don't know what I want...
What will I do?
I'm confused...
I'm always confused...

I don't know what's going on...
I'm feeling something...
I've just arrived and I saw the love...
I thought that I was not in love...
But when I see...
I don't know what happens...
I don't know what to do...
What will I do?
I'm confused...
I'm always confused...
© Copyright 2000 Paula Elis - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 06-03-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Angelical Face! Sometimes life can be very confusing. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
Angelical Face
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2 posted 06-04-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Angelical Face   Email Angelical Face   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelical Face

Thanks for the warm welcome!
I'm just sad you were the only one that replied...
Irie
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3 posted 06-04-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Don't worry Hun...
You'll get more replies!  
So many poems get posted here it's hard to
keep up with all of them.
Not to mention, it's the weekend and people
are out and about.
I hope your confusion will fade in time!
Best wishes to you and Welcome to the Passions Family!  


 ~Sheri
Poet deVine
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4 posted 06-04-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to Passions! We have all been in that confused state at one time or another, but that's why being poets is so great! We can write about it.  Keep writing!  
Slashed soul
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5 posted 06-04-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

A poem of woe, I see you write,
on this subject, i'll shed some light,
love is strange, and sometimes pains,
but fear not, there is always sunshine after rain.

love your poem, I have too felt the confusion! -secret-It wont last forever..

-Rich-the soon to divorce man!!!
-taste the freedom once more, but the beds still empty at night, oh for a woman  )
David2
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6 posted 06-04-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Hi!
   Welcome to passions! Your poem was very thought provoking and emotional . I enjoyed reading it.
                David2
Jeremy Halstead
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7 posted 06-04-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Wow!! Nice job.  The way your ideas would begin and then suddenly end and then go into another idea that would do the same truly expresses the wishy-washiness of what confusion is...keep it up.

Jeremy Halstead

 
Angelical Face
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8 posted 06-04-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Angelical Face   Email Angelical Face   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelical Face

Thanks Irie, Poet deVine, Slashed Soul, David2 & Jeremy!
I'm glad you guys liked my poem, and thanks for the advises I'm sure this confusion won't last forever...
Lone Ranger
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9 posted 06-04-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

Welcome to passions!
Looking forward to more from you...
and I have a doubt...
when you say:"But when I see..."
what or who do you see that leaves you like this, breathless?
anyway, great poem!

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society
vandana
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10 posted 06-04-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Welcome to passions!!!!!! Enjoyed it.
Bunny
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11 posted 06-04-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Bunny   Email Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bunny

Let me just say I really liked your poem.....I prefer sad poetry and sometimes my poems stand out awkwardly in the sea of lovy dovy poems that the forums have.  It was nice to read another poem that swayed to a sadder side, good work!
Lorraine Nisbet
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12 posted 06-04-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Hi, Angelical Face!

Really enjoyed your poem.  Welcome to Passions!

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Corinne
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13 posted 06-04-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Hi and welcome to passions!

Corinne
Angelical Face
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14 posted 06-04-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Angelical Face   Email Angelical Face   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelical Face

Thanks Lone Ranger, Vandana, Bunny, Lorraine & Corinne, glad you guys liked it!
Oh, and Bunny, don't get too excited because i'm not really a sad person...

 Paula Elis
REBECCA ALLYN
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15 posted 06-05-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

I completly understand confusion!! I really like your work, please keep writing!!!

LOTS of LUV,

Becky
 
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