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SpitFire
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0 posted 06-03-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SpitFire

Go 'Head I Dare

I walked without you for so long,
on a cool, crisp night,
more dark than usual...
full of fury, full of fright.

I walked past the place,
where I lost my shoes and my soul.
I touched the window and thought of you,
thought of the treasures you carelessly stole.

I fell there under the window,
I let myself go,
sore and broken body falling,
crashing into the cold, hard concrete below.

In the night, in the cool,
I sat there wishing I could get inside,
take everything back,...gather it all in my pocket,
escape..... and run to my shelter to hide.

I'd carefully attempt a mending,
of a soul I so desire.
Meticulous work I do understand,
but it's a wish of mine that burns like an eternal fire.

Taking it back from evil's grip,
from such pressures of your so called care,
making it mine again,
just TRY fighting me this time,...go'head..I dare.

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 06-03-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I'd carefully attempt a mending.
of a soul I so desire.
Meticulous work I do understand.
But its a wish of mine that burns like an eternal fire."
Very intense thoughts and wishes.  I hope the mending has begun.  Take care.  James
demoninlove
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2 posted 07-02-2000 12:33 PM       View Profile for demoninlove   Email demoninlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for demoninlove

Beautiful Poem! But getting back that soul complete and unscarred is a distant dream and will need more than mending by oneself - It will need a helper!
Deepak Menon

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3 posted 12-23-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

This one is great Fire
Love it  
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