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eclipse29
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since 2000-06-03
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0 posted 2000-06-03 01:47 PM


something passes me by in a fit of rage
i dont understand why she feels this way
im suddenly trapped in a threatening cage
i search for the answers but am turned away

im lonely but protected all in time
im understood by one but confused by aother
i feel as though i have commited some crime
but know that only truth can discover

feelings of pain hidden underneath
arms reached out and taken within
questions of heartache, pain and greif
occupy that love and keep it from him

i want to smile and see the same
everywhere i look theres always a frown
someone unhappy, not liking the game
spining in dizziness i plead to drown

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Michael
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1 posted 2000-06-03 02:15 PM


I can't tell you how well I relate to this one, eclipse...  Welcome to Passions, I hope to see more from you soon.

Michael

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