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eclipse29
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0 posted 06-03-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for eclipse29   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eclipse29

to look into your eyes
is to risk the confusion
from the look returned
to breath your scent
is to risk the oblivion
in which i am taken
to feel your warmth
is to risk the pain
from falling in love
to speak your name
is to risk the silence
that will be returned
to think your thoughts
is to risk the atmosphere
in which i am alone
to be your friend
is to risk the wall
that is placed before me
to miss your smile
is to risk the tears
that flow down my cheaks
to dream your kiss
is to risk the reality
that you do not love me
to want your love
is to risk a promise
that will never be kept

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1 posted 06-03-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Whoa,...I am impressed.  Truly.  "Welcome, welcome" .....looking forward to more of your work. Take care *Peace.
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Welcome to the family! Excellent poem...I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
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Eclipse~
Welcome to Passion's !

Without risk ... there is no chance for gain.
Go for it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lorraine Nisbet
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4 posted 06-03-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Hi eclipse99,

Wow... and a big welcome.

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Rose Petal
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5 posted 06-03-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

Oh my, I feel you are me, wow, I loved your poem! welcome to passions! loved it!!!!!!!
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