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No Fly Zones" (Haiku)

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deleeme
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0 posted 06-03-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Oh, a stopping place
All rolled out for me waiting
I think I'm attached!

Looks like all is clear
Right out here in the open--
Swat!(now that's dead wrong)!


 "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)

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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 06-03-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You are dead right, David
I haven't mastered the haiku yet
But I can swat a fly
This is delightful
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2 posted 06-03-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good!!! I love this.  
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3 posted 06-03-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dear David; What a delightful surprise! This is very funny! LOL! Are there an inordinate amount of flies in Michigan? I'm glad you got there safely, Bro. Love, Big Sis

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4 posted 06-03-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David~
Very nicely done
Swatting at flies on the run
Landing zone is clear

Enjoyed your humor !
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 06-03-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Now just look at yourself!! Aren't you having fun and this is a GREAT one. Your humor is swatting around. (What is a Haiku?)
Really, really like this one.  Miss ya!marcy
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6 posted 06-03-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I haven't been able to do these either. Glad to see that you gave it a try, David! Very cute!

Denise
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