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Sunshines "word" challenge with a twist
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Sunshines "word" challenge with a twist |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York 
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I decided to use two words, fiery and cold.. ~*~*~*~*~ The north wind blows it’s icy chill as we linger near the fire. Outside the air thick with frost. Inside burns ..desire. Sheltered from frigid air, safe from winters blow. Our hearts full of yearning, as embers softly glow. Your strong hands hold me close, caressing my heated skin. Passions burn fiery hot, the coldness gone within. Words of eternal love from our lips are spoken. Promises of forevermore, never to be broken. Entwined in loves luminous dance, hearts fervid with loves flame. We once knew only icy chill, now we’ll never be the same. Suddenly, reality, when from my dream I wake. Alone I rise from crispy sheets, alone... my bed I make. 6/3/00 [This message has been edited by angelsamongus (edited 06-03-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so "hot" it's "cool"! Well done! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is a very neat piece of writing. I enjoyed the read...thank you for sharing. Don't know of the challenge but have to say this is good,...really good. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Excellent poem... perfect imagery... chilling and intense at the same time. well written take care, jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
Thank you for the comments! I had fun with it  ~Lori |
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