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Sunshines "word" challenge with a twist

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angelsamongus
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0 posted 06-03-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

I decided to use two words,
fiery and cold..

~*~*~*~*~

The north wind blows its icy chill
as we linger near the fire.
Outside the air thick with frost.
Inside burns ..desire.

Sheltered from frigid air,
safe from winters blow.
Our hearts full of yearning,
as embers softly glow.

Your strong hands hold me close,
caressing my heated skin.
Passions burn fiery hot,
the coldness gone within.

Words of  eternal love
from our lips are spoken.
Promises of forevermore,
never to be broken.

Entwined in loves luminous dance,
hearts fervid with loves flame.
We once knew only icy chill,
now well never be the same.

Suddenly,  reality,
when from my dream I wake.
Alone I rise from crispy sheets,
alone...
my bed I make.

6/3/00





[This message has been edited by angelsamongus (edited 06-03-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Lori Ayrault - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 06-03-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is so "hot" it's "cool"!  Well done!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

SpitFire
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2 posted 06-03-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~This is a very neat piece of writing.  I enjoyed the read...thank you for sharing.  Don't know of the challenge but have to say this is good,...really good.  *Peace.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 06-03-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Excellent poem...
perfect imagery...
chilling and intense at the same time.
well written
take care, jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

angelsamongus
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4 posted 06-03-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for angelsamongus   Email angelsamongus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angelsamongus's Home Page   View IP for angelsamongus

Thank you for the comments!
I had fun with it  
~Lori
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