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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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they hovered wishes hushed flown by recollection in guardless times dulled perhaps fear-borne inside by splintered calls of mercy for the heart to cusp with yours no more yet still the night lacking place of unslept dreams imaged clear your mind I crept to hide silence memory’s cry ‘this life is but a shadow a glyph of another’s bind’ entrapped I fleet safe-rivened move on without a travelled wing into a cycle assignation of mystery a clue in the darkness for eyes restless of eyes a-fight for rest your search is mine |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kamla, this is truly a beautiful piece.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Indeed, full circle, for ever the balance there must be. When two become one, yes... balance. Eyes to rest means not the mind however! Beautiful Indeed K. And still, a sense of melancholy... though hope too.. too smart for this boy!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dear Kamla, I realize that there are parts of it that only one person would be able to understand and I'm not him but, from the rest that I do understand, this is really a work of art. Such a tapestry you can weave....... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
OOOhhhhh wow! Incredible poetry alert! I especially LOVED these lines..... yet still the night lacking place of unslept dreams imaged clear your mind kudos! ~Heather |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
When I read this, I had the feeling I was walking across and arid, alien land searching for something..odd! I really loved this poem! Kamla, you amaze me!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kamla--you seem to write the emotion down without using words...how can that be? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and so the cycle continues... just wonderful Kamla!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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