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Diamond Skies |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 As the satin veil of darkness falls Within feathery folds your memory calls It begs me follow close and cling to it My soul is but a candle waiting to be lit Defenseless against the power you hold Even after the embers of touch are cold The magic of ebony sky begin to mesmerize Your image emerges amidst diamond skies Here in the sanctuary the night sky built The darkness releases any traces of guilt I’m free to hold you close but out of sight Under the guarded blanket of the night Allowing my heart to open for you To sample the nectar of love so true As the morning comes I curse the rise Your image escapes my tranquil skies Good bye sweet love until the moon rise I release your memory into diamond skies [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful! I love the "diamond skies". jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
BUTTERFLY.... GIRL THIS IS EXQUISITE... IT IS BREATHTAKING... I AM SITTING HERE WITH THE WORST CASE OF POET ENVY... THIS IS BY FAR YOUR FAVORITE OF MINE... YOU TURN A PAGE WITH THIS ONE MY SS *bowing before you* show my muse mercy....*smile*  later-poet-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BDC-- wow!!! breathtaking. this is definitely my favorite piece written by you. this was absolutely beautiful!! Janet isn't the only one envious...so am I. You wrote your heart in this one big time girl. Lovely, simply lovely! Amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." Theme of the Week 07/02/99 Fate....And Making It Happen "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oooh....you have left me breathless, butterflies_don't_cry...such beautiful imagery, such exquisite emotion...I love it. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
BDC, This is awesome! Oh how dreams can set us free if only for a short while. We have them to hang onto night after night! Beautifully writen! ~Sheri |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ There is magic in the glint of the night sky lit with the glow of diamond dust from your pen. I enjoyed the thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
jwesley* Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed them! J.M.* Ya have me blushin here....now stop that  I am very happy that you liked it though...diamond skies do much to inspire!!Thank you S.S. for the butterfly kisses today!! Amy* Thank you, and after seeing the beauty you have been rolling out as of late....it is I that envy!!! Krista* Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments, I'm happy you enjoyed it Irie* Yes they do....thank goodness!! Thank you for reading and enjoying. Marge* That was a beautiful little note...you are so kind!! I'm so glad you liked it and thank you for reading. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think JM has said it best, this just simply exquisite!..amazing!....I think this is the best work I have seen from you and some of the best work I have EVER seen. Exquisite, beautifull, awesome, magical, they are all words that do this work justice. My words cannot properly describe how this has moved me, thankyou for sharing . God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I absolutely loved this Butterflies ... left me wishing I had "your" dreams ... WOW! Excellent writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~BDC,...I am jumping on this wagon of truly deserved compliments. Wonderful poem,...truly beautiful writing. *sigh*,..thank you. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I think I know the type of sky you are talking about, they are mix of light blue, a pale brilliant white and some grey, they appear to have a dreamy quality. I love those type of skies. As the satin veil of darkness falls Within feathery folds your memory calls It begs me follow close and cling to it My soul is but a candle waiting to be lit Defenseless against the power you hold Even after the embers of touch are cold The magic of ebony sky begin to mesmerize Your image emerges amidst diamond skies a magical and beautiful poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
EagleOne* Your "words" speak volumes to me, thank you my dear friend from the bottom of my heart. Kit* Thank you for reading and for enjoying. SF* I'm happy to have made you *sigh* Thank you. Brian* YES those are the ones....I do love them to, thank you so much for reading. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is so beautiful. I loved this one. Had to read it a second time. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Allowing my heart to open for you to sample the nector of love so true." Wonderful smooth and romantic poem. James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eloise* I'm touched, thank you very much James* Thank you much for reading. |
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