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~Rain Dream Haiku~

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Honeybee
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~RAIN DREAM HAIKU~

5-7-5

Soft rain serenades,
filling my soul with rapture
as I dream of you

*By Melissa Honeybee*
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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Melissa~ this felt like love wrapping it's arms around me. I happen to love rain. -SEA
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Thank you for the compliment SEA!  I love rain as well, listening to it's soothing melody at night, and then writing about it
(I love to analyze rain and personify it).
I should repost my other haikus on rain for you.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-02-2000).]
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Beautiful dream, Melissa!

Denise
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That was quite a good poem.

Rain is cool, people should write more about it!
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Lovely little Haiku Melissa  
you have done well, keep dreaming those lovely dreams  
Tracie~


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Melissa~
You've captured a lovely thought.
~*Marge*~



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Melissa, oh queen oh Haikus. Another wonderful one, looking forward to the next one. I love soft sunny rain with aclear blue sky especially when it is too hot out.

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Melissa.......This is wonderful. I love it, and I love the rain.  

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Amazing to fill such a lovely thought with so little words ... wonderful Melissa!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Thank you everyone for the compliments and for the support!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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such beauty in such few words, Melissa.  I am truly in awe of your talent.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


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Thanks Krista, and I am in awe of your talent as well!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
 
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