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vandana
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0 posted 06-02-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


You're only one,
As the star so bright,
You whisper me into my ears,
You say the words,
I'm longing to hear,
You're only one,
Who makes me happy ,
You're only one,
Who takes my heart away,
At Night,
Every hour go by slowly,
Don't want to end this night,
It's so right,
to have you beside me,
You're only one,
You'll be forever in my heart,
You're my only one,
You're only for me,
© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 06-02-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Vandana,

Great writing!!  Only one word comes to mind....love.  Just wonderful.  

Lone Wolf


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This is a great expression of love, Vandana!

Denise
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3 posted 06-02-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

vandana--

the beauty of love comes from your pen in this one. loved the expressions you have here. lovely!

take care,
amy  

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Mike
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4 posted 06-02-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nicely done Vandana...
I enjoyed your poem very much.
tracie66
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Vandana~
Sweet loving words tenderly written  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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VanDana~
You sing love so sweetly.
Nicely done, hon.
~*Marge*~


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