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Irie
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0 posted 06-02-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Irie



Sitting-
  Under the silver moon
    Wondering if you’re alright
Listening-
  Here in silence
    Alone in the still of the night

Worrying-
  Like a friend would do
    Caring in every way
Waiting-
  For you to tell me
    Tell me everything’s Okay

Silently-
  I look for you
    But you I do not see
Wondering-
  Is it possible
    Have you forgotten me?

Patiently-
  I sit waiting
    As time passes by
Emotions-
  Running wild
    And I ask my self, Why?

Why-
  Must I sit here
    And worry like I do
Despair-
  I could go with out
    But I care too much for you

Sitting-
  I wait patiently
    Drowning with concern
Wishing-
  Upon the stars
    For you to soon return




 ~Sheri



[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 06-02-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Sheri - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 06-02-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I know what it is like to miss a loved one, one of of closest friends moved to Australia abd not a day goes by that I don't think of her.

really enjoyed yor poem, well written.

Why-
Must I sit here
  And worry like I do
Despair-
I could go with out
  But I care too much for you

Sitting-
I wait patiently
  Drowning with concern
Wishing-
Upon the stars
  For you to soon return


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2 posted 06-02-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Irie,

Hope that you hear from your loved one soon.  It is hard to sit there wondering if they are okay and why they have not called at least.  Best wishes to you...hope it all works out.  

Lone Wolf


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3 posted 06-02-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It is one of the hardest things in the world, sitting around waiting and wondering. You've expressed that well, Irie!

Denise
Irie
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4 posted 06-02-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Brian, LW, Denise,
I too hope that I hear something soon. Very soon!
I don't like to be left hanging, it's no fun!  

Thank you for your replies!  
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5 posted 06-03-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Irie,
     it is hard when you get shut out or don't know what's going on. . . I know. . .

Excellent poem, my friend. . .

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