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Open Poetry #7

As Sleeping Beauty Sleeps

Rose Petal
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 52
WVa. USA

0 posted 2000-06-02 06:16 PM

As she sleeps, dreams fill her head,
Toughts of kisses, loves lips bled,
Roses smell, roses of red,

Unto her dreams she is awake,
Laying awaiting her mate,
Prince of charmings at her rescue,

Loves fair test of rainbow hues,
Where fairytales are made everafter,
Romantic passion and endevours,

Of moonlit kisses upon golden ponds,
Water lilies and beautiful swans,
Danceing fairies to a lovers tune,

Underneath the silver moon,
As she sleeps, she desires,
One of whom nother can compare,

She awakes by a gentle kiss on the cheek,
To find him kneeling there, beside her,
Is she dreaming still?

Has her dream become real?
Sleeping beauty no longer asleep,
For prince charming has her heart for keeps...

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

1 posted 2000-06-02 07:01 PM

Quite interesting.

Sounds somewhat reminiscent of Keats' Eve of St. Agnes...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-06-02 08:17 PM

very "English!"

Kathleen
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Rose Petal
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 52
WVa. USA

3 posted 2000-06-03 03:36 PM

Frac, please send me a copy of that poem you mentioned for I have never heard of it...but would enjoy it if you say it is something like mine! Thanks;0

Irish , I am a little English, thank you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-06-03 04:22 PM

"Is she dreaming still?
Has her dream become real?"
Wouldn't that me a wonderful moment.
If a lovely dream could become reality.
Loved the flow and the gentle spirit of this poem. James

Rose Petal
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 52
WVa. USA

5 posted 2000-06-03 11:12 PM

J12345,Yes it would be a magical, beautiful moment...Sleeping beauty is still sleeping as we speak, waiting for prince charming,thanks

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