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As Sleeping Beauty Sleeps

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Rose Petal
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since 03-21-2000
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0 posted 06-02-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

As she sleeps, dreams fill her head,
Toughts of kisses, loves lips bled,
Roses smell, roses of red,

Unto her dreams she is awake,
Laying awaiting her mate,
Prince of charmings at her rescue,

Loves fair test of rainbow hues,
Where fairytales are made everafter,
Romantic passion and endevours,

Of moonlit kisses upon golden ponds,
Water lilies and beautiful swans,
Danceing fairies to a lovers tune,

Underneath the silver moon,
As she sleeps, she desires,
One of whom nother can compare,

She awakes by a gentle kiss on the cheek,
To find him kneeling there, beside her,
Is she dreaming still?

Has her dream become real?
Sleeping beauty no longer asleep,
For prince charming has her heart for keeps...
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fractal007
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1 posted 06-02-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

Quite interesting.

Sounds somewhat reminiscent of Keats'  Eve of St. Agnes...
Irish Rose
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2 posted 06-02-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

very "English!"

 Kathleen
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Rose Petal
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3 posted 06-03-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

Frac, please send me a copy of that poem you mentioned for I have never heard of it...but would enjoy it if you say it is something like mine! Thanks;0

Irish , I am a little English, thank you.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 06-03-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Is she dreaming still?
Has her dream become real?"
Wouldn't that me a wonderful moment.
If a lovely dream could become reality.
Loved the flow and the gentle spirit of this poem.   James
Rose Petal
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5 posted 06-03-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

J12345,Yes it would be a magical, beautiful moment...Sleeping beauty is still sleeping as we speak, waiting for prince charming,thanks
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