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Rose Petal
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since 2000-03-21
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0 posted 2000-06-02 05:46 PM


Deep into this night, this hour,
I am drinking your words from poetrys' cup,
Into thy hands, thy heart,

Every drop of you deep into me,
I am surrounded by your mystery,
Mysterious eyes full of excitement,

Open doors of thy hearts chambers,
Lay awaiting your beckoning,
Beckoning my every word, every thought,

Into your heart I blow my kisses,
Warm love flowing into your soul,
From your head to your toes,

I am astounded, surrounded by the chemisty I feel,
Feeling every breath, every warmth of you without touch,
Thy words I hear, makes me miss you ever so much,

You have poured your love all over me,
All through me, all around me,
I only exsist by your existance,

I only breath by your breath,
Your touch keeps thee alive,
Your words keeps the fire of my heart aflame,

No other cannot tame my soul,
Nor captivate my thoughts, my desires,
For this field, is burning a ravaging fire,

The field of my heart,
Where roses bloom by your the watering of your words,
Where the sun shines from thy smile,

I am your fantasy, your dream, everything in between,
I am your heart, your mind, your soul,
Every ounce of me was created by the poetry I sup,

Your love given to me from passions cup!




[This message has been edited by Rose Petal (edited 06-02-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-06-02 08:11 PM


Rose Petal~
'Deep into this night, this hour,
I am drinking your words from poetrys' cup'

This one is so sweet, it's sure
to attract the bees.
Delightful thoughts, hon.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-06-02 08:18 PM


I have to agree with Marge.....this is SWEET!!!  Looks as though your cup runneth over.  Good for you!!

Excellent writing!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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Denise
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3 posted 2000-06-02 09:01 PM


This is lovely, Rose Petal!  

Denise

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-06-02 09:11 PM


Wow! Excellent poem! I love this Rose Petal.  
prinzezz15_4eva
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5 posted 2000-06-03 11:56 AM


I really liked this Rose Petal....It touhed my heart.
Rose Petal
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since 2000-03-21
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6 posted 2000-06-03 03:40 PM


Thank you one and all for your comments, I love this site, I feel so welcome, you guys are great, this encourages me and inspires me.Thank you once again.
Lorraine Nisbet
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7 posted 2000-06-03 07:26 PM




Hi, Rose Petal,

Wow...I like... Wow...I like.

~Lorraine
                            

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


Rose Petal
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8 posted 2000-06-03 11:19 PM


Thank you Lorraine! Glad you liked it
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