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Aimster
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0 posted 06-02-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

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Amy M Kennedy

Looking out into the ocean of deep blue
My thoughts gradually turn to you
Your sweet face comes to me as the soft clouds pass on by
Watching the waves roll in, I let out a deep sigh
The seagulls near by, I can hear their cry
And I think of you so far away, and I wonder why
I can hear the sound of laughter all around me
Closing my eyes I try to get you out of my mind...but it's no use...you are all I see
In love with you completely, I can't deny how I feel
My heart and soul you captured, you softly did steal
I know you feel the same, but chains keep us apart
Society dictates us not together, though still you have my heart
Forever I will search for a way for us to be together
And even if we can't be...I still will love you always and forever
I am surrounded by paradise, beaches of white
But all I feel is sadness in my heart, as my throat closes tight
Then a smile comes across my face as I remember the time we had
And in an instant I know that our love is right, and I don't feel as sad
You were my friend before you were my lover
Never have I met someone so wonderful...and never this much will I love another


 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-02-2000).]
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JOY 14
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since 09-22-1999
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1 posted 06-02-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Beautifuly written about someone who it sounds like you love more than anything.  

Joy
Marina
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Pickering, Ontario


2 posted 06-02-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Ok Amy.....it is all showing now!!  Name???

Marina
ParisGrl
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3 posted 06-02-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

Amy,

This is such a heartfelt poem.  If you love someone let them go and if they come back its meant to be.....i know its hard god do i know.....but if it doesn't work, you will always have a friend.  Anyhow, i throughly enjoy your poems.

PG
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 06-02-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Amy,

Beautifully written, my friend.  I hope that some day you and your love find a way to be together.  It is so hard to let go when it feels so right, but if it is really right....somehow, someway, you will be together.  Best wishes to you!!  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Aimster
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Charlotte, NC


5 posted 06-02-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

--everyone thanks for your sweet replies and for taking the time to read my work and respond. marina...sorry no names...this love has to be secret at least for now. just suffice it to say they have my heart always!

take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."


Theme of the Week
07/02/99

Fate....And Making It Happen

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."


Janet Marie
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6 posted 06-02-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

your poets pen is on fire these days my dear
your cranking the poems out...
me thinks your muse is most inspired.
SEND SOME MY WAY-- me muse is still mad at me
later amy-gator
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Irie
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since 12-01-1999
Posts 1526
Washington State


7 posted 06-03-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Oh Aimster,
I know this feeling all to well.
I swear the last four poems I've read tonight
came straight from my heart!
Very well done!  


 ~Sheri
REBECCA ALLYN
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8 posted 06-04-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

This is so well written!! This is such a beautiful piece of work!!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
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