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Freedom (Pantoum)

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Munda
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0 posted 06-02-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Among mighty trees, my spirit flies free
Unbounded to life’s irrational rules
Wandering the forest of fantasy
Enchanted by magic only for fools

Unbounded to life’s irrational rules
I spread my wings on winds of make believe
Enchanted by magic only for fools
Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve

I spread my wings on winds of make believe
Seeing the world through the eyes of a child
Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve
Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild

Seeing the world through the eyes of a child
Finding truth with the golden eyed dragon
Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild
Revived is the mystic of Avalon

Finding wisdom with the golden eyed dragon
The secrets of life no longer concealed
Revived is the mystic of Avalon
The true art of living once more revealed

The secrets of life no longer concealed
Wandering the forest of fantasy
The true art of living once more revealed
Among mighty trees my spirit flies free


[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 06-02-2000).]
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1 posted 06-02-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Well, I enjoyed this. I cannot comment on the type of poem it is because I have no knowledge of it.   The subject and content were wonderful though.   Forgive my stupidity.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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2 posted 06-02-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

WOW a wonderful poem, what an imagination you have. I love the images especially

I spread my wings on winds of make believe
Seeing the world through the eyes of a child
Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve
Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild

Seeing the world through the eyes of a child
Finding truth with the golden eyed dragon
Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild
Revived is the mystic of Avalon

great poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"
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3 posted 06-02-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Munda~
So beautifully done.
These are not easy to accomplish,
but you've made it flow so seemingly effortless.
Wonderful.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 06-02-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is fantastic, Munda! Seeing through the eyes of a child is the way to go! It's so nice to see you posting again! I missed you!

Denise
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5 posted 06-02-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

SAY HEY--
MUNDA-GIRL is back...cool
and back with an AWESOME poem...
this is enchanting in its imagery.
nice to have you posting again
later munda-gator
jm


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that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Munda
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6 posted 06-03-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Well thank you guys.   Although I have very little time at the moment I will try to be here more often. Missed you too !  
Mike
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7 posted 06-03-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Beautifully written...   enjoyed muchly Munda...
X Angel
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8 posted 06-03-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

OOOOH I like dis!  
Ok now I really want to try a Pantoum, you did a beautiful job Munda! I enjoyed the content as well as the style. You are a wonderful poet, and I enjoy seeing what new stuff you have up yer sleeve for us!
~Heather
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9 posted 06-04-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Thank you guys. It's good to see not everybody forgot who I am.  

XAngel, if you have coffee au lait, we can do pantoum  
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10 posted 06-04-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

of course there is cafe au lait!!!
Munda
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11 posted 06-05-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Okay ! I'll bring the cookies !  
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12 posted 06-06-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Fabulous my friend, simply fabulous.  
Munda
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13 posted 06-10-2000 04:16 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Thank you Gloria, my fabulous friend.  
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