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Slashed soul
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Across the sifting sands of gold I look,
I open my heart as I open a book
finding the love inside gone
a dull glow, where once it shone.

My steed is chrome and black,
my armour battered by love,
weapons drawn in anger now sheathed
destruction of two hearts complete.
We never ran, we could never hide
this pitch battle was fought from inside.

I need love, I kidd myself i'm strong
for a womans love is what I long
Someone to share my kalidascope life
a love to cherish during the night.


-Rich-

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-then there was nothing, but in my hour of darkness a chink of light shone ....offering hope and love....that light is you.
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Very expressive, Slashed soul!

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


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Oh Rich, this is sad.

We do get battered, don't we!

The great thing about love is that we crave

it , desire it, need it and it always helps

us heal our hearts.

Keep looking hon, she will find you!

Great writing!

MBlue


 
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i believe love can heal our voids. A powerful poem, great stuff.

I need love, I kidd myself i'm strong
for a womans love is what I long
Someone to share my kalidascope life
a love to cherish during the night.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers

La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh)
"Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much
I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir
The applause nails down my silence
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory
People send postcards
And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I sold my medal
It paid a bill
It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks
The sadness will never go Will never go away
Baby it's here to stay

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