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**Hey Love, sometimes...**

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MagnoliaBlue
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0 posted 06-02-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

~Sometimes~

Sometimes I lie thinking in
The wee hours of night

Wanting you with me
I know thatís not right.

We have no ties
              Only sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
              Not think so much of you.

Sometimes I lie awake in
The wee hours of night

Wondering who is sharing your bed

And I have to stop thinking
Get those thoughts out of my head.


We have no ties
              Only sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
              think so much about you.


Sometimes I bring your face before me
And I can only think of

Sweet memories of two

Perhaps its time to move on
Not care so much for you.


©1975~CJB~




 
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Denise
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1 posted 06-02-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, sometimes it is very hard to move on. This expresses that wonderfully!

Denise
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2 posted 06-02-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Good work. Thoughtful.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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3 posted 06-02-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

beautiful!!! are you in my head or something? you have read my thoughts hon and wrote them perfectly. i know all too well this feeling you describe. keep up the excellent writing...i look forward to reading more from you.

take care!
Amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."


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Jana Tovey
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4 posted 06-02-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

I like this poem.  It sounds like this person is jut on the edge of a breakthrough.  

That's nice...to see a poem about getting over something and going on.
MagnoliaBlue
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5 posted 06-02-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Thanks for the flowers everyone.  The comments help a lot.

Amy...Maybe you were inside my head and I just wrote what you told me to.  
I hope these feelings I describe are in the past for you,Amy... as they are for me!

MBlue

 
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