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A Love Like Ours

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Aimster
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0 posted 06-02-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

A Love Like Ours
Amy M. Kennedy

A love like ours is something special and rare
If I need to be reminded...I look in your eyes, and it's all there
From your gentle kiss to the way you handed me your heart
Hoping to the stars and heavens we never have to part
Oh but if only it were that easy, for you to love me and me to love you
Our feelings are so deep, intense, and true
If only the world would gently fade away
The day I could be with you...oh what a sweet day
Our love was created in the heavens, and passed onto Earth
Created before either of us were though of, before our birth
From celestrial skies this all did start
Forever and always you have my heart
You are the keeper of my dreams, my hopes, my fears
You are the catcher of my love, my wants, my tears
A love like ours is poetry set into motion
The finest mixture of any love potion
A deep bond and understanding exits between you and I
And when I'm with you I feel as though I could fly
I wish together in the night we could fly away
Forever in your arms I could always lay
Do you think its possible for you and me to be like this
To think this all started with a magical first kiss
Actually no it started from the first day we met...it was fate
You are my friend, my lover, my everything, my soul-mate
Without you, forever lost I would be
A love like ours was written in the stars...penned with DESTINY



 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."





[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-02-2000).]
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Marina
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1 posted 06-02-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Beautiful, Amy. Still to early to tell us?????


Marina
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-02-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

destiny=meant to be...
this is beautuful amy...
SO MUCH emotion written so tenderly
a poem filled with your heart and soul for sure.

let fate and destiny lead you...
time will tell
love ya, jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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3 posted 06-02-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

"Here's looking at you kid"

great writing Aimster  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

amazon_lover
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4 posted 06-02-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Amy
That brings a lot of good memmories and you're lucky to have one like that. If fate leads to something like this then I'd accept it gladly for there's nothing more blissful than to feel like this. Thanks for this poem.
((((hugs))))
A_L
ParisGrl
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5 posted 06-02-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

Amy,

What a beautiful poem!  I loved it, i'm sure he loves you as much as you love him.  )  I too believe in destiny.  

Keep up the good work!

PG
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6 posted 06-02-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

A love like ours is poetry set into motion
The finest mixture of any love potion
A deep bond and understanding exits between you and I
And when I'm with you I feel as though I could fly


a lovely poem,  beautiful.

the last line is magical

A love like ours was written in the stars...penned with DESTINY

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers

La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh)
"Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much
I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir
The applause nails down my silence
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory
People send postcards
And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I sold my medal
It paid a bill
It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks
The sadness will never go Will never go away
Baby it's here to stay

Honeybee
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7 posted 06-02-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

~Amy~

A beautiful poem!  I am glad to see that you have found your soulmate.    Do you show your poems to him?

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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