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Marge Tindal
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Pages Of The Past
~*Marge Tindal*~

Images of the past cascading
Falling in surround
Recall of the melody
The song you left around

You fell in soft surprise
from pages of the past
Brought new revelations
of a love that was meant to last

Held within the Rolodex
of memories from the past
You came
You sang
You breathed of love
That love will always last

Thumbing through your memories
now laying in soft surround
Finding all the reasons
why you never let me down

In soft repose now tucked among
the satin memory pages
Songs of just one yesterday
lingers through the ages

The jukebox of my heart
where old love songs seem to stick
Wouldn't you just know
ours hung around
and became a classic






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-02-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I so enjoyed this Marge ... especially your last line where your love "became a classic". It's so wonderful to know that such deep and committed love exists so wonderfully in your heart.

Best wishes,
/Kit
netswan
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2 posted 06-02-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Beautiful Marge - such a lovely sweet poem.
Aw, I love reminiscing the past  
and yet, still cling to the future.

~netswan
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3 posted 06-02-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge~
You sweet thing   you keep churning those beautiful tunes out don't you.
This one makes it to the top of the charts.

Luv Tracie


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Martie
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4 posted 06-02-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

"Held within the Rolodex
of memories from the past"

"The jukebox of my heart
where old love songs seem to stick"

Wonderful lines...my faves, but the whole poem is great...just like you are!

Denise
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5 posted 06-02-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, Marge!   It's great when love stands the test of time!

Denise
TerryW
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6 posted 06-02-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Marge~
     This is so lovely!  You must have your muse on good overtime pay, dear!



Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 06-02-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Marge - you come up with the BEST metaphors and similes - I swear - you are a gifted person.  This was very sweet
Severn
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8 posted 06-02-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

A gorgeous piece Marge(y) - I think it is precious - and it has excellent, clear imagery...

(you know me and my imagery!)

Hugs and love
K
Marge Tindal
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Kit~
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

NetSwan~
Thank you.

Tracie~
Thanks for putting your quarter in the jukebox.

Martie~
Thank you ... mine too !

Denise~
Thank you ... it is !

TerryW~
Oh ?  She's supposed to get paid ?
Well, darn ... NOW you tell me !
*grinning* (but then you always have me
ing !

LongJohn~
Awwww !  Gosh, I hope you know how good that makes me feel.

Kamla~
So glad you 'can see clearly now' ...
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 06-02-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Rock-ola on, Marge!!
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Marge~

Hold onto that song, girl!!  Such a sweet and wonderful tale.  A classic indeed!!  Great expressive writing!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


12 posted 06-03-2000 03:21 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Dear Marge,

This is a super poem....really lovely.

          Images of the past cascading
                                                Falling in surround
                                              Recall of the melody
                                            The song you left around
--------------------------

You got it just right in this one...as in all of yours.
I am sorry I took so long to get to your poems this time...I really was too tired last night when I got back from a play we went to watch.
Love ya Marge!!
Love and hugs,
Lizzie
  


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 06-03-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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Balladeer~
You sure know how to play the oldies !
Just my style !


LoneWolf~
Thank you so much.
Can't help but sing the classics !

Lil' Lizzie~
Now I'm really glad you liked this one.
Thank you, sweetie.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ah Marge, again you've read my mind...as I read your piece I saw this gorgeous old jukebox in my mind...scrolling down through the responses...what indeed do I find?!

Rock on!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

X Angel
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15 posted 06-03-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

oooh this was wonderful, love should grow old and become an antique...a bit faded and rumpled but even MORE valuable that when it was new
I like this lots
Marge Tindal
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Sunshine~
Glad you found B-9 on the jukebox !
Here's a little history lesson about
the Rock-ola jukebox.


=============================================
In 1936 the Queen Mary made her maiden voyage from New York City. She was the newest and most luxurious ship afloat. Capturing the moment, David C. Rockola delivered one of his 12-Selector Jukeboxes to her decks, and the headlines read "The Queen Will Have Music Wherever She Goes."
=============================================


XAngel~
I couldn't agree with you more !
A treasure to hold for sure.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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