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[Roxane]
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since 2000-06-02
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0 posted 2000-06-02 05:27 AM



      Tiny Tyrant


I love this suckling baby man,
too new to see and know
of whom or what, and yet
demanding that I understand
should soiled discomfort grow
too much and rouse his fret,

or colic bite a restful snooze.
I love this gushing feel,
full breasts responding to
his need, the knowing how to use
a tight-lipped suction seal
until his bonding coo.

Bold rivers through his parents flowed
and met in him. How far
upstream did melt begin?
Who gave the chromosomes that showed
his eyes that onyx star,
flashing in his grin?

Could he improve their gift to him?
He'll send no finer gene
downstream to those unborn,
his cup, perfection to the brim!
I vow, his daughter queen
could kingdoms one day mourn.

A tiny tyrant rules my heart,
I gladly bend the knee
of usurped loyalty,
and beg his lordship to impart
a gentle hand on she
who nurses royalty.


      --Roxane

© Copyright 2000 [Roxane] - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-02 05:49 AM


Awesome Roxane -  wonderful poem -
loved it.  A mother of three grown sons
LOL been there done that

Welcome to Passions

~netswan

Nan
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2 posted 2000-06-02 07:22 AM


This is wonderful, Roxane - I love the poem - and the title is exquisite - Welcome to Passions - You're gonna love it here - I look forward to reading more of your work - Check your email for a special greeting..
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-06-02 07:26 AM


Your tiny tyrant has captured your heart and you've expressed it beautifully in this sweet poem Roxane ... welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-06-02 10:07 AM


And they keep the Tyrant title if not the Tiny! I like this. Welcome to the family!  
Parker
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5 posted 2000-06-02 10:30 AM


Roxane, Welcome to passions, a beautiful flowing poem. Just loved it.

Parker

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2000-06-02 10:38 AM


Roxane

Terrific ABCABC scheme - and the subject is so There.  Welcome to the Forums - you are going to be so comfortable and welcome here - there is so much support and goodness in this site

psst, Watch out for that rascally Balladeer, Haleyja (Parker), and Toerag.  Trust ONLY me, because my heart is pure and they are scalawags!  Don't worry about them reading this mesaage - Its in italics, and I'm pretty sure they don't know how to speak Italic.    

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 06-02-2000).]

Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

7 posted 2000-06-02 10:41 AM


I too nursed my babies...there were days when I thought I'd never have time to myself...and now I long for them again...mine are 21, 16, 13 and 10...and though they nursed for many a moon, it only seems like a fleeting moment..cherish the time they spend at your breast...
Sweet writing...save it for your babe

Denise
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8 posted 2000-06-02 10:45 AM


This is fabulous, Roxane! Welcome to Passions!  

Denise

angelsamongus
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since 2000-05-27
Posts 70
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9 posted 2000-06-02 10:53 AM



~Roxane~
Thank you for taking me back to that special time I once shared with my children, such a beautiful poem.

~Welcome to Passions~


~Lori

[Roxane]
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since 2000-06-02
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10 posted 2000-06-02 04:23 PM


Thank you so much for your warmth and acceptance. Passions in Poetry arouses passion for poetry and is lovely.

You are a wonderful family!


R.

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