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kat
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since 2000-05-20
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0 posted 2000-06-01 10:24 PM


Once in a life time

A starlit sky without the moon
You’re the moon that makes it bright
Take me to heavens embrace
My lover who lights up the night

My heart, my jigsaw puzzle without its piece
You’re that piece that filled that space
That undeniable hunger that can’t be fed
No matter how often I see a picture of your face

To be with you, to warmly hold you,
To feel you in the midst of my soul
The enemy, obligations and distance
Circumstances beyond our control

For once in a lifetime we will find it
A love beyond compare
Once in a lifetime is all I need
If only you were here
Not there



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MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
1 posted 2000-06-02 01:34 AM


Touching poem kat..  Loved it!  Know those feelings all to well..  Great Work!!!!
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-06-02 05:57 AM


Kat  wonderful poem.  So far have loved
all yours, so will keep reading and responding.
I haven't had time to be in here much the last few days as working hard on my new
business, but still all the same will
search for kat when I get time.

~netswan

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

3 posted 2000-06-02 09:53 AM


MysticalKnight, I know what you mean. I know these feelings all too well myself and when you've found someone and circumstances prevent you from being with them, you always feel like something is missing. Thanks for you're compliment.  


Netswan, I'm taken back. Thanks so much for complimenting my work like that. I'm glad you enjoy my poems and I always enjoy the responses you take the time to give me. I hope I can continue to produce the types of poems you enjoy. Thank-you so much!  
Kat

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

4 posted 2000-06-05 12:59 PM


This is just Mmmmmmmmmmm!!
Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York
5 posted 2010-11-14 07:17 PM


If only.
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