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Dreams(first poem-for Kit's challenge)

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SEA
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0 posted 06-01-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


They tell me
you are a lost cause
a silly dream-
like Santa Claus

But I believe in dreams
even the ones that seem
may never come true

Like the one I dream about-
Being loved by you.
-SEA- (1983)
© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-02-2000 05:56 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is a precious SEA ... and 16 years ago!  Its a perfect little sentiment wrapped up in a sweet and tender verse.  Challenge well met SEA ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-02-2000 06:54 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Soft and tender and really gets your message across.    James
netswan
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3 posted 06-02-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ah SEA what a beautiful first poem.
How tender.

~netswan
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4 posted 06-02-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

SEA-GIRLS BACK...COOL  

very sweet poem...wistful and innocent.
this has been so cool getting to read
everyones early works
later Sea-gator
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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5 posted 06-02-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, SEA!  

Denise
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6 posted 06-02-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi SEA
That was a very tender message.

A_L
 
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