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Lone Ranger
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since 04-16-2000
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Salvador , Bahia , Brazil


0 posted 06-01-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

This poem was made by a friend of mine, she doesn't know i'm doing this, but I just wanted to know what you guys think about it...

Confused


I don't know what's going on...
I don't feel anything...
The love is ending...
Why?
Why did it happen?
Everything is changing...
I don't  know if I want it...
I don't know what I want...
What will I do?
I'm confused...
I'm always confused...

I don't know what's going on...
I'm feeling something...
I've just arrived and I saw the love...
I thought that I was not in love...
But when I see...
I don't know what happens...
I don't know what to do...
What will I do?
I'm confused...
I'm always confused...
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 06-01-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Sneaky little you     Your friend has captured the fight between heart and mind.  I can relate to the battle and the words she has woven.  
Lone Ranger
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2 posted 06-01-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

thanks for reading this poem, but what's really tossing my brain is a little question..
is the person she talks about in the poem me?
lorilockheart
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since 05-06-2000
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3 posted 06-01-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

One way to find out - write her a poem asking her.  You're creative, I know you can do it!  Please let us know how it turns out!
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Lone Ranger
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4 posted 06-01-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

Lori...
I don't think there is a better idea than this one... thanks
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