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True Feelings

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Aimster
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0 posted 06-01-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

True Feelings
Amy M. Kennedy

It's two AM in the morning and at the wall I do stare
Wishing with all my heart and soul that you were here or I was there
This pain is killing me softly inside
But from it there is nowhere for me to hide
I love you so much, and I know you feel the same way
Wishing like hell you didn't have to leave that day
Forever an eternity I could be with you
But I'll settle for a minute a day or maybe two
You complete me and make me all that I am and want to be
And for the rest of our days I'll make you happy...you'll see.


 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
ParisGrl
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1 posted 06-01-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

Amy,

such a beautiful moving poem.  i love it.  I hope that you get the person you want. If not you could always be friends.

Laura
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2 posted 06-01-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Amy,...this is so heartfelt...so wonderfully written.  Hope all your dreams come true. *Peace.
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3 posted 06-01-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Amy, I know this feeling very well. You do a beautiful job of describing it. It will all work out, everything has a way of turning out for the best.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Janet Marie
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4 posted 06-02-2000 10:02 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

time will tell,
just keep telling them how you feel
and give it all time...
somethings take longer to work thru
something are worth the wait


 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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5 posted 06-02-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Amy,

Your heart is coming out of that pen...so touching and lovely.  I hope that things work out for you.  They say...good things come to those who wait....I hope so for you!  Great writing!  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 06-02-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Excellent writing Amy!

Marina
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This is so sad...yet so full of hope.

Lovely work...

K
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Nice work.
CocoBaci
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9 posted 06-27-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Amy, this one is so nice it gently speaks from the heart.  I just was roaming thru the site and felt I needed to read some of your verses before I go .. nite nite
Coco  
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