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RSEvans
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0 posted 06-01-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

Swept along like sand in wind
My heart moves through the night
Hoping it will stop again
In its weary flight.

Across the land and over sea
It flits in endless drifting
Away from her and away from me
Like sands through hourglass sifting.

What did she say?  What were the words
That caused my heart to leave?
It's gone now, left me cold and hurt
Bleeding from my sleeve.

My heart is sweeps across the plains
Like dirt blown in the wind
And without it here my soul remains
Never to love again.


 Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.

© Copyright 2000 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 06-01-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

RS,

Ouch to this....sorry to hear of your misfortune.  I hope that your heart does find love again and that you realize the right person for you will come along some day.  Great writing!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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2 posted 06-01-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Wow,...I love your writing style.  Such a nice piece of poetry here...so much emotion expressed.  Well done.  I hope your heart heals. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-01-2000).]
addiction
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3 posted 06-01-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for addiction   Email addiction   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit addiction's Home Page   View IP for addiction

brilliant writing. i love you, you know.
Denise
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4 posted 06-02-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad, Rob, yet beautifully done!  

Denise
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 06-02-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I love the imagery you painted with this sad tale...the winds blowing etc.  Painfully beautiful is all I can think to say.  Glad to see you posting bro.
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 06-02-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~nice poetry~~ a searching heart seeking loves light, adrift with the wind.
This piece was enjoyable to read.
Marina
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7 posted 06-02-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sad, but very well written Rob.  Haven't seen you in while....nice to have you back.

Marina
devina
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8 posted 06-02-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Must I tell you again...NEVER say never...tis provoking Fate!!! This is beautiful Rob...glad to see you back for a bit!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

RSEvans
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9 posted 06-02-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Lone Wolf and Spitfire:  thank you both.  My heart is fine.  This was a poem for how I was feeling at the moment...not forever as mentioned.

addiction - love you too babilicious...

dsnyder - Thank you Denise.

pFF - love you sis... thanks for your comments.  I miss you too.

Danny - Thanks

Marina - Thank you.  It's good to be back.

devina - how well I know.  Thank you for your comments.  i'll try to stick around this time.
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