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Willow's Story
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Willow's Story |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Willow’s Story < !signature-->Willow, bend make amends for when you lend your heart… Love’s misspent when you’ve no intent to never wend your heart… Willow, cry hide face, shy why did you lie to your heart? With willows’ dance comes true romance so if you ever wend, to me, befriend for I will nurture your dear heart. 1 June, 2000 ©KRJ . Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How sad, Sunshine, and not like your usual style at all. Hope everything's OK. Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Very sweet and touching Sunshine. Great job- nothing less would be expected from you though. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Hope the clouds have not taken over. Great writing here.  Take Care, Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sunshine,...I love the way that you wrote this....it read so soft. It's a wonderful piece of poetry. Really. *Peace. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, although it may have been sad, I hope you enjoyed it nonetheless...Sun is still peeking out...  Lori, high praise indeed...thank you... Lonewolf...no way!... Spitfire, I was going for soft...thanks for seeing that... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wow! this one really flowed for me. i liked the messsages and meanings as well as the way you connected it all together. liked this piece very much! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, thank you for reading... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, I loved the analogy of the willow tree and your heart. Beautifully written.... the bending and crying of the willow as you proceed with caution. Lovely piece. marcy |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This was written in an unusual form, but it worked for me nice job ~Heather |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marcy, Heather, thank you both for reading and commenting... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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