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Corazon
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0 posted 06-01-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corazon

if a wish were granted
to me as I stand
gazing
up at the stars
and I could
catch up the glitter
and scatter it worthily
grandly, on the page
so that you could feel
just what my eyes see
how my
my thirsty poet's soul
would dance
but that, as much
as it would
satisfy the need
to ever quest for
perfect words
if wishes were
forthcoming
I would pick another…
my wish you see
as I stand sleepless
in the darkness
is for you and me
hand in hand
the same stars
to see as
they become our
private audience
my world no longer
in need
I could want no more
if you and I
were
we




[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 06-01-2000).]
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CocoBaci
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1 posted 06-01-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Cora, very nice poem you've shared!
Coco  
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 06-01-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Corazon,

Lovely and heartfelt poem.  I hope you get your wish!!!  

Lone Wolf


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doreen peri
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3 posted 06-01-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

very romantic
i could see the stars in your eyes
ahhh... to grasp that dream...fantasy is a wonderful thing

i hope all your wishes come true
Balladeer
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4 posted 06-01-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I wish for you that your wishes be granted. It's a beautiful poem, Corazon........again  
Parker
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yes must agree with the above, beautiful. The dreams we dream and hope for is what keeps us alive.

Parker
Corazon
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6 posted 06-02-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

am on borrowed cp for just a minute but wanted to say thank you.....you all are great, its the readers that make the poems  
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