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A Heart
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A Heart |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
A heart that was once so pure Is now consumed by anger Won't stop until I'm sure I am out of this danger Don't know which way to turn Since my head won't stop spinning It was a hard lesson to learn For me there is no winning Time to pick up the shattered pieces Of my torn up broken heart With the expiration of these leases Life gains a brand new start It's a wonder my heart beats After all this awful aching Of all the amazing feats To withstand the pain of breaking Wish I knew the reason For the burden that I bear Will persevere through all seasons Regardless of the scars I wear Hope to find that which I seek Continue searching high and low Wiping the tears from my cheeks Tomorrow will be a brighter day I know Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
That's the spirit! Rise to live and love another day. You never know... what you desire could be around the corner. Good writing, very graphic. I feel the anxiety and pain. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jana, Thanks!! Exactly what I plan to do...live and love another day. I hope it is around the corner and I am able to find it. Glad to hear I was able to convey those emotions so well. Appreciate the comments.  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW... this piece touched my heart deeply. you expressed yourself well in it...with a strength of character that i admire. i am sorry that you are hurting at this time...but very glad to see you are going to be able to pick up the pieces and move on. i wish you much luck! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
OH, this is so sad, make me want to give you a hug! Corinne |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I can feel every word you have written here Lone Wolf. Your writing just keeps getting better SAD??? I suppose it depends on how you look at it. I choose to see the anticipation of the future in this piece, however , I can also see the sadness of it. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lonewolf, wish I could fly over there and hug you. Beautiful heartfelt poem and well written ~netswan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I felt this one sweetie!!! Deep and searching are the words with a small light you have held for the end of the tunnel. Excellent work. **Angel Wing Hugs** to you my friend! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You've worked yourself well through the pain ... now on to regaining your life. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your heartbreak comes through expressively, but so does your wonderful optimism LoneWolf ... there are reasons that hearts "bend" and do not "break" ... lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy....thank you and I will move on. I am betting you have the same strength in your heart, you just have to find it. Corinne....thanks for the hug, I needed that! Jeffrey.....thanks, m'friend. I do try to focus on the future not dwell on the past. Netswan....such sweet words, thanks. You are wonderful friend. BDC....yes, there is a small light, my friend. **AW HUGS** back to you as well! Marge....that life will be regained...thank you! Kit....sure feels broken at times....I'll take your word that's it's only bent. Thanks! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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