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A Heart

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 06-01-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

A heart that was once so pure
Is now consumed by anger
Won't stop until I'm sure
I am out of this danger

Don't know which way to turn
Since my head won't stop spinning
It was a hard lesson to learn
For me there is no winning

Time to pick up the shattered pieces
Of my torn up broken heart
With the expiration of these leases
Life gains a brand new start

It's a wonder my heart beats
After all this awful aching
Of all the amazing feats
To withstand the pain of breaking

Wish I knew the reason
For the burden that I bear
Will persevere through all seasons
Regardless of the scars I wear

Hope to find that which I seek
Continue searching high and low
Wiping the tears from my cheeks
Tomorrow will be a brighter day I know




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Jana Tovey
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1 posted 06-01-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

That's the spirit!  Rise to live and love another day.  You never know... what you desire could be around the corner.  Good writing, very graphic.  I feel the anxiety and pain.
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 06-01-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jana,

Thanks!!  Exactly what I plan to do...live and love another day.  I hope it is around the corner and I am able to find it.  Glad to hear I was able to convey those emotions so well.  Appreciate the comments.  

Lone Wolf



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3 posted 06-01-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

LW...

this piece touched my heart deeply. you expressed yourself well in it...with a strength of character that i admire. i am sorry that you are hurting at this time...but very glad to see you are going to be able to pick up the pieces and move on. i wish you much luck!
take care,
amy  

 
"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

Corinne
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4 posted 06-01-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

OH, this is so sad, make me want to give you a hug!

Corinne
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5 posted 06-02-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I can feel every word you have written here Lone Wolf. Your writing just keeps getting better  

SAD??? I suppose it depends on how you look at it. I choose to see the anticipation of the future in this piece, however , I can also see the sadness of it.

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

netswan
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6 posted 06-02-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lonewolf, wish I could fly over there
and hug you.
Beautiful heartfelt poem and well written

~netswan
Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 06-02-2000 05:53 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I felt this one sweetie!!! Deep and searching are the words with a small light you have held for the end of the tunnel.  Excellent work.  **Angel Wing Hugs** to you my friend!
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8 posted 06-02-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
You've worked yourself well through
the pain ... now on to regaining your
life.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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Kit McCallum
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9 posted 06-02-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Your heartbreak comes through expressively, but so does your wonderful optimism LoneWolf ... there are reasons that hearts "bend" and do not "break" ... lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 06-02-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Amy....thank you and I will move on.  I am betting you have the same strength in your heart, you just have to find it.  

Corinne....thanks for the hug, I needed that!

Jeffrey.....thanks, m'friend.  I do try to focus on the future not dwell on the past.

Netswan....such sweet words, thanks.  You are wonderful friend.  

BDC....yes, there is a small light, my friend.  **AW HUGS** back to you as well!

Marge....that life will be regained...thank you!

Kit....sure feels broken at times....I'll take your word that's it's only bent. Thanks!



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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