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What Dreams May Come
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What Dreams May Come |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
What Dreams May Come I would Never be able to deny It is there, when we say goodbye Playing a tune of my heart’s lullaby I could Chance that love might exist To see what I have missed And taste that first kiss I should Know that Heaven is where you’re from Just let my heart, float going numb And take…what dreams may come. Marina June 1 2000 |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Perfect!!! What an exsquisite poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice style Marina and I have a feeling that you will. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great poem!! So much said in very little space. Nice writing, Marina.  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Lizzie, thank you very much James, thanks,....and you never know.... Lone Wolf, thank you. I am glad you liked it. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Marina. . . you really have done well with this one. . . "I should Know that Heaven is where you’re from Just let my heart, float going numb And take…what dreams may come" Here's hoping that your dreams come true Marina. . . --------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes you would... yes you could... yes you should.  I LOVE THIS POEM GIRL!! that last verse it perfect!! very nice Marina-girl VERY later poet-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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gemini shadow Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70the mystic |
very romantic poem a little tame for my taste but very nice LOL  LOL(couldnt resist) LOL I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes I want to be the touch you need every single night I want to be your fantasy And be your reality And everything between I want you to need me, like I need you. celine dion |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marina girl, your writing just keeps getting better and better All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
VERY ROMANTIC! I love all it says in few words! Very nice writing. MBlue |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Know that Heaven is where you’re from Just let my heart, float going numb And take…what dreams may come. wonderful and magical poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh) "Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir The applause nails down my silence La tristesse durera Scream to a sigh, to a sigh I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory People send postcards And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery La tristesse durera Scream to a sigh, to a sigh I sold my medal It paid a bill It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks The sadness will never go Will never go away Baby it's here to stay |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven, dreams can be wonderful things. I can be a dreamer, but I would rather make them come true. Thank you....I did have something particulary in mind when I wrote it. Jm, You are too good to my girl! You are are way too sweet. Thank you Gemini, Hun.....I have to at least make it look like I care about something other then...Ehem...well you know. So when are you coming up here so we can go out and find some real men girl!!!!!!!! Jeff, thank you....I can always count on you! MBlue, thank you very much....I am glad you liked it. Brian, thank you....you are very sweet. ( surprising from hanging out with Gemini) Marina |
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