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What Dreams May Come

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Marina
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0 posted 06-01-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

What Dreams May Come

I would
Never be able to deny
It is there, when we say goodbye
Playing a tune of my heart’s lullaby

I could
Chance that love might exist
To see what I have missed
And taste that first kiss

I should
Know that Heaven is where you’re from
Just let my heart, float going numb
And take…what dreams may come.


Marina June 1 2000


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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 06-01-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Perfect!!! What an exsquisite poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-01-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice style Marina and I have a feeling that you will.   James
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 06-01-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Great poem!!  So much said in very little space.  Nice writing, Marina.  

LW


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Marina
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4 posted 06-01-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Lizzie, thank you very much

James, thanks,....and you never know....

Lone Wolf, thank you. I am glad you liked it.

Marina
Sven
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5 posted 06-01-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Just wonderful Marina. . . you really have done well with this one. . .

"I should
Know that Heaven is where you’re from
Just let my heart, float going numb
And take…what dreams may come"

Here's hoping that your dreams come true Marina. . .  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-01-2000).]
Janet Marie
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6 posted 06-02-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

yes you would...
yes you could...
yes you should.  
I LOVE THIS POEM GIRL!!
that last verse it perfect!!
very nice Marina-girl VERY
later poet-gator
jm

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that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

gemini shadow
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7 posted 06-02-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for gemini shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemini shadow

very romantic poem
a little tame for my taste but very nice
LOL     LOL

(couldnt resist) LOL



 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion
Jeffrey Carter
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8 posted 06-02-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Marina girl, your writing just keeps getting better and better  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

MagnoliaBlue
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9 posted 06-02-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

VERY ROMANTIC!

I love all it says in few words!

Very nice writing.

MBlue


 
brian madden
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10 posted 06-02-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Know that Heaven is where you’re from
Just let my heart, float going numb
And take…what dreams may come.

wonderful and magical poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers

La Tristesse Durera (Scream to a Sigh)
"Life has been unfaithful And it all promised so so much
I am a relic I am just a petrified cry Wheeled out once a year, a cenotaph souvenir
The applause nails down my silence
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I see liberals I am just a fashion accessory
People send postcards
And they all hope I'm feeling well I retreat into self-pity, it's so easy Where they patronise my misery
La tristesse durera
Scream to a sigh, to a sigh
I sold my medal
It paid a bill
It sells at market stalls Parades Milan catwalks
The sadness will never go Will never go away
Baby it's here to stay

Marina
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11 posted 06-02-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, dreams can be wonderful things.  I can be a dreamer, but I would rather make them come true.  Thank you....I did have something particulary in mind when I wrote it.

Jm, You are too good to my girl!  You are are way too sweet.  Thank you

Gemini, Hun.....I have to at least make it look like I care about something other then...Ehem...well you know.  So when are you coming up here so we can go out and find some real men girl!!!!!!!!

Jeff, thank you....I can always count on you!

MBlue, thank you very much....I am glad you liked it.

Brian, thank you....you are very sweet. ( surprising from hanging out with Gemini)

Marina
 
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