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Oh Precious Darling
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Oh Precious Darling |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Oh precious darling Sweet song of night Bring forth your love Escape from this fright Keep hold of my hand Safe, warm and tight Embrace my heart Keep me in light Sweet little lullaby As I lie in your arms Wanting it deeply Needing it more Close your eyes slowly Feel my breath on your neck Tickle your ear For your heartbeat I’ll check Beating so wildly As you lie there in wake Thinking so gently How much more you can take Slumbering on This dream in your head No waking moments Just sleeping instead Tossing and turning It feels so unreal This craving and yearning Your skin I must feel Reaching to touch you Your skin close to mine The dizzying feeling I go on to find That this is no dream But real as you see The first touch consumes me I’m now feeling free. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely!! A beautiful love poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful----very very sweet sentiment here--and please, somebody check for MY heartbeat---I know at the very least it just skipped a beat... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Lizzie Serenity this was an attemp at a Lullaby that we talked about (your challenge) needless to say the words took their own path so I let it go where it wanted sometimes poetry writes itself I am only the channel used to put it on paper. Thanks for being there Rich |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spiked~ Very, very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank You Marge |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This has a romantic, soothing feel to it Spiked ... leaves me feeling warm and cozy ... sigh, lovely poem. Best wishes, /Kit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Spiked,...oh I love this. Well done,...truly great writing. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
aw spiked that was lovely, really romantic. Keep hold of my hand Safe, warm and tight Embrace my heart Keep me in light Sweet little lullaby As I lie in your arms Wanting it deeply Needing it more ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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