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spiked
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0 posted 06-01-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Oh precious darling
Sweet song of night
Bring forth your love
Escape from this fright

Keep hold of my hand
Safe, warm and tight
Embrace my heart
Keep me in light

Sweet little lullaby
As I lie in your arms
Wanting it deeply
Needing it more

Close your eyes slowly
Feel my breath on your neck
Tickle your ear
For your heartbeat Iíll check

Beating so wildly
As you lie there in wake
Thinking so gently
How much more you can take

Slumbering on
This dream in your head
No waking moments
Just sleeping instead

Tossing and turning
It feels so unreal
This craving and yearning
Your skin I must feel

Reaching to touch you
Your skin close to mine
The dizzying feeling
I go on to find

That this is no dream
But real as you see
The first touch consumes me
Iím now feeling free.



[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-01-2000).]
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1 posted 06-01-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is lovely!! A beautiful love poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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2 posted 06-01-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is beautiful----very very sweet sentiment here--and please, somebody check for MY heartbeat---I know at the very least it just skipped a beat...
spiked
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3 posted 06-01-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you very much Lizzie

Serenity this was an attemp at a Lullaby that we talked about (your challenge) needless to say the words took their own path so I let it go where it wanted
sometimes poetry writes itself I am only the channel used to put it on paper.
Thanks for being there
Rich
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4 posted 06-03-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Spiked~
Very, very nicely done.
~*Marge*~


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spiked
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5 posted 06-03-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank You
Marge
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6 posted 06-03-2000 08:30 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This has a romantic, soothing feel to it Spiked ... leaves me feeling warm and cozy ... sigh, lovely poem.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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~Spiked,...oh I love this.  Well done,...truly great writing. *Peace.
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8 posted 06-03-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

aw spiked that was lovely, really romantic.

Keep hold of my hand
Safe, warm and tight
Embrace my heart
Keep me in light

Sweet little lullaby
As I lie in your arms
Wanting it deeply
Needing it more



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