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mystery
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0 posted 06-01-2000 01:40 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery


TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS
LIKE THERE ONLY WAS ONE
I KNEW THIS WOULD CATCH UP WITH ME
THE FIRST DAY IT HAD BEGUN
I HAD TO HAVE THEM BOTH THOUGH
REGARDLESS OF WHAT PURPOSE I WOULD DEFEAT
I NEEDED TWO HALVES TO MAKE A WHOLE
TO MAKE MY LIFE COMPLETE
WHAT LACKED IN ONE
COULD BE FOUND IN ANOTHER
THIS IS WHY I DIDNíT THINK TWICE
ABOUT DROPPING ONE OF MY LOVERS
ONE TALL, DARK & HANDSOME
WITH MONEY TO BLOW
THEE OTHER SMART, FUNNY& TALENTED
WITH MODESTY LIKE A VIRGO
ALL I EVER WANTED IN LIFE
COULD NEVER BE FOUND IN A MAN
SO I COMBINED THE TWO
AND CREATED MR WONDERFUL
BUT SCREWED UP A SIMPLE PLAN
THE PLAN WAS THAT THESE TWO
WOULD NEVER FIND OUT ABOUT EACHOTHER
BUT THE WORLD IS SMALL
AND I HAD IT ALL
TILL ONE SAW ME WITH THEE OTHER
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ESP
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1 posted 06-01-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lol....I found this one pretty amusing! If ya can't find Mr Perfect in one man, try two!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
mystery
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2 posted 06-01-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

ESP, I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYED!!!!!!!!!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-04-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Perhaps we would all enjoy two if there were not so much conflict that would come with the package....and of course they would each have two and so on.  James
Tennessee Angel
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4 posted 06-04-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

All good things must come to an end! I really enjoyed this one!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
PoetasterD
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5 posted 06-04-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for PoetasterD   Email PoetasterD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetasterD

I can relate to your poem. In it you had two halves to make the whole that you desired. This is similar to the poem I posted last night "She & Her" in which I only have one, but dream about the other who fills the void as I sleep. Who knows, maybe some day with the help of a little gene spicing, we could all have the perfect mate???

Best wishes,

Poetaster D
 
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