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rene
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0 posted 06-01-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

What did she suggest?
Did you forget
why you shouldn't trouble her

Taste Eden and neglect
the rest
Promises are made and kept
Does it feel too good to bear?
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mystery
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1 posted 06-01-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

VERY ORIGINAL!
I LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT IS SHORT BUT POWERFUL.
I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU
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2 posted 06-01-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Beautiful!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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rene
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3 posted 06-01-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

thankyou one and both
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Rene

This left me much intrigued and pondering lol. I really liked your expression. Looking forward to reading more from you. In a word this was...powerful  

amy

 
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