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Crystal Water - Kit's Challenge - First poem I ever wrote(high School)

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spiked
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Crystal Water


The sparkle of the crystal water
shows so bright and clear
The waves that slowly wash to shore
In the stillness of the day.


[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
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a study of meditation...beautifully expressed...
spiked
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lol
Meditation before the capacity to meditate.
Thanks Serenity
was written from an picture on the class wall.
Teacher made me do it.
Corinne
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awesome early poem!

Corinne
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Teacher made a lot of us do it Spiked ... and I'm sooooooo glad!  Great start to your penmanship ... pretty picture, thanks for sharing it Spiked.

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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