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Lost In Confusion

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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 06-01-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Rosebud1229

Ever been there?
Lost in confusion,
not knowing which way is right,
which way is best for you?
Ever been to the point of no return,
lost out there, in such a mess
You really hate to confess
to such a situation.
That has you so caught up,
You don't know where you are exactly,
If only you could find the yield sign
while going down the road.
Some kind of highway signs to guide the wheel
that keeps turning around and around.
Ever been there?
I can tell you it's a place of confusion.
To many jungles, seems like i'm in some exotic land
that beguiles me into the deep of the greenery.
Lost yet for awhile while I go rafting down the river, catching the rainbow ,
If only a shimmer of it along the way.
The rainbow signifies a renewing to me as I gaze upon the sky that offers such tranqility to me.
Everflowing breezes rush through my being.
Making me regain my existence that was lost somewhere in  confusion.
Now found upon the blinking of my eyes.


 

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Temptress
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1 posted 06-01-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Yep. I've been there.   Nice work here.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


CocoBaci
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Rosebud, very nicely expressed!
Coco  
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3 posted 06-01-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ever? Yes..still am most of the time! Good poem.  
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