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Lost In Confusion
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Lost In Confusion |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Ever been there? Lost in confusion, not knowing which way is right, which way is best for you? Ever been to the point of no return, lost out there, in such a mess You really hate to confess to such a situation. That has you so caught up, You don't know where you are exactly, If only you could find the yield sign while going down the road. Some kind of highway signs to guide the wheel that keeps turning around and around. Ever been there? I can tell you it's a place of confusion. To many jungles, seems like i'm in some exotic land that beguiles me into the deep of the greenery. Lost yet for awhile while I go rafting down the river, catching the rainbow , If only a shimmer of it along the way. The rainbow signifies a renewing to me as I gaze upon the sky that offers such tranqility to me. Everflowing breezes rush through my being. Making me regain my existence that was lost somewhere in confusion. Now found upon the blinking of my eyes. < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep. I've been there.  Nice work here. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Rosebud, very nicely expressed! Coco |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ever? Yes..still am most of the time! Good poem.  |
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